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im forced to smile, never frown
tears fall like rain
no one sees the pain
it hurts more than a gun shot
do they love me? love me not
no one cares, i cry inside
all this pain that i have to hide
i know that this will never get better
mom dont cry when you get this letter
i just want to say goodbye
dont worry, never again,
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crying

Contributed by all_that_i_can_be on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

crying constantly, tears dripping down
im forced to smile, never frown
tears fall like rain
no one sees the pain
it hurts more than a gun shot
do they love me? love me not
no one cares, i cry inside
all this pain that i have to hide
i know that this will never get better
mom dont cry when you get this letter
i just want to say goodbye
dont worry, never again,
will i cry

Copyright © all_that_i_can_be ... [ 2005-08-02 02:19:05]
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Re: crying (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:44:07 AM AEST
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I really liked your peom. I'm a big fan of short poems when they have enough emotion and i truly liked yours.

Brooke

Re: crying (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely-nobody on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:30:00 AM AEST
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very good! your style reminds me of myself sorta. i tend to write like this a lot.

Re: crying (User Rating: 1 )
by bruised_angel on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:39:54 PM AEST
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i feel the pain in this poem i like the style to its a great poem

Re: crying (User Rating: 1 )
by xthrewmyluvawayx on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 04:33:08 PM AEST
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awww thats sad....very good....i really like the part where it says " it hurts more than a gun shot do they love me? love me not" i really like that....but i love the poem over all very good ....i can relate to it soo much...very good

Re: crying (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:32:33 PM AEST
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sadness can sometimes be beautiful i think youve found the balance between the two. good stuff

Re: crying (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:22:11 AM AEST
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wow..i loved it! i mean this poem describes me all too well! and it was an awesome poem!

Re: crying (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:04:01 PM AEST
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I read this because you replyed 2 one of my poems saying I might understand yours if I read them and I do.Great write I can really understand it.

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