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is there still time for one more try?
How could we let go of a love so true?
It would be a mistake to let this simply pass us by.

I've thought through both of the choices at hand,
and I've realized there's really only one.
Being without you is one thing I can't stand,
so this whole mess needs to be undone.

I'm not real sure how you think about all of this,
and knowing you I'll never know.
But I think all it would take is just a kiss,
to bring back what we shared a short time ago.

I want this seperation to come to a close,
I know we are meant to be.
You are the one that my heart chose,
the love inside must be set free.
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Can Things Change?

Contributed by curtisc on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:33:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Can things change between me and you,
is there still time for one more try?
How could we let go of a love so true?
It would be a mistake to let this simply pass us by.

I've thought through both of the choices at hand,
and I've realized there's really only one.
Being without you is one thing I can't stand,
so this whole mess needs to be undone.

I'm not real sure how you think about all of this,
and knowing you I'll never know.
But I think all it would take is just a kiss,
to bring back what we shared a short time ago.

I want this seperation to come to a close,
I know we are meant to be.
You are the one that my heart chose,
the love inside must be set free.

Copyright © curtisc ... [ 2005-08-04 01:33:20]
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Re: Can Things Change? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 02:26:59 AM AEST
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Things can change!!!! Keep the faith... Great writing.. Keep up the good work..

Re: Can Things Change? (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:06:31 AM AEST
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Well glad to kow some DO NOT give up, Yes, fight for the love, and know its there.Very well, expressed, and I will keep my fingers crossed for you.! I am one for true love....just hasnt made it to keep for me yet.!

Brew~

Re: Can Things Change? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:53:56 AM AEST
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nice write as well as noble intentions . . .

Ben

Re: Can Things Change? (User Rating: 1 )
by tommylover on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:33:02 PM AEST
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i really like this poem..i know how you feel.. anything can happen, and things can change..untill then keep your loved one close to your heart..and one day when you least expect it they might relize what they were missing, and just come running right back..

Re: Can Things Change? (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:24:18 PM AEST
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wow...i really liked this one...very heartfelt. I hope all this drama does fall into place, and I do hope that everything goes your way, and you get what you want. I think you really deserve it! Awesome write...Tanya

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