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Array ( [sid] => 102663 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => control loss [time] => 2005-08-04 16:11:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Life is torture feel my pain
flowing through his open veins
i view the moonlight seeping from his eyes
a touch
a kiss so deep
they are untouched by all theses lies
He is my true dark angel
his heart is so much warmer than mine
he makes me hurt so bad its good
he plays games with my mind
I want to touch his body
i want to taste his soul
i want to feel him touch me
I WANT TO LOSE CONTROL!!! [comments] => 7 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 43 [informant] => silenceinthestorm [notes] => Picture edited due to indecent content. Please remember this is a family site. Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

control loss

Contributed by silenceinthestorm on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:11:12 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Life is torture feel my pain
flowing through his open veins
i view the moonlight seeping from his eyes
a touch
a kiss so deep
they are untouched by all theses lies
He is my true dark angel
his heart is so much warmer than mine
he makes me hurt so bad its good
he plays games with my mind
I want to touch his body
i want to taste his soul
i want to feel him touch me
I WANT TO LOSE CONTROL!!!

Copyright © silenceinthestorm ... [ 2005-08-04 16:11:12]
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Re: control loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:19:36 PM AEST
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I really like this poem! the picture goes perfectly with it!

stew:)

Re: control loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:28:24 PM AEST
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Lol wow that picture kind of surprised me when I saw it lol, I liked the poem it was good.

Re: control loss (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 04:41:18 PM AEST
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wow! very hot poem

Re: control loss (User Rating: 1 )
by mand on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:00:45 PM AEST
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it all went together nicely, good job

Re: control loss (User Rating: 1 )
by all_that_i_can_be on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:09:31 PM AEST
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well that was...erotic. great writing!

Re: control loss (User Rating: 1 )
by trixxx on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:40:54 AM AEST
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nice poem, reads well
feel stuff from it

Re: control loss (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 11:15:17 PM AEST
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Well, the poem is nice. I am surprised you got by with the picture though. Personally I feel it doesn't belong on the site. Kids read and write poetry here. Sometimes my 8 year old is sitting here while I'm at the poetry site. It's not something I would want her to see. Two people being intimate is a wonderful thing, it just has it's place and I don't feel it is here. That's just my feeling. Peace Laura

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