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Array ( [sid] => 102677 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Just Can't Explain How or Why [time] => 2005-08-04 19:23:26 [hometext] => This is more of a love letter, if I had enough nerve to senBd it...hopefully one day...let me know what you think [bodytext] => I look at you and I have to look away, only to look back at you again.
I feel shy and not shy all at the same time
I go over the possibilities in my mind, I indulge in unspoken fanatsies, about you, with you,...for you
But I won't begin to tell you what we could be...because we probably won't be that's just the way my world works
I know one thing there is electricity at any moment of contact, that pleasurable chill that runs down my spin when I'm in your presence, when you touch me...oh god when you touch me. That absolute excitement I feel in every inch of me, everytime I think of you
When I met you I was broken, you had no idea how broken, nobody did because I never completely understood it myself.
I had no idea not in any way shape of form what it meant to be whole
It sounds silly maybe even melodramatic but it's true.
But you took me in your arms, accepted me without judgement, without holding my past against me and told me to just be patient. Just those small things mean the world to me I could never begin to describe how it feels.

You showed me myself, just by being yourself..honest..true..and caring
and for the first time
I saw myself inside your eyes
inside your amazing, beautiful, sexy eyes

Thank you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 335 [topic] => 33 [informant] => lovesucks [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

I Just Can't Explain How or Why

Contributed by lovesucks on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 07:23:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I look at you and I have to look away, only to look back at you again.
I feel shy and not shy all at the same time
I go over the possibilities in my mind, I indulge in unspoken fanatsies, about you, with you,...for you
But I won't begin to tell you what we could be...because we probably won't be that's just the way my world works
I know one thing there is electricity at any moment of contact, that pleasurable chill that runs down my spin when I'm in your presence, when you touch me...oh god when you touch me. That absolute excitement I feel in every inch of me, everytime I think of you
When I met you I was broken, you had no idea how broken, nobody did because I never completely understood it myself.
I had no idea not in any way shape of form what it meant to be whole
It sounds silly maybe even melodramatic but it's true.
But you took me in your arms, accepted me without judgement, without holding my past against me and told me to just be patient. Just those small things mean the world to me I could never begin to describe how it feels.

You showed me myself, just by being yourself..honest..true..and caring
and for the first time
I saw myself inside your eyes
inside your amazing, beautiful, sexy eyes

Thank you

Copyright © lovesucks ... [ 2005-08-04 19:23:26]
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Re: I Just Can't Explain How or Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 07:39:11 PM AEST
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this made me smile. the person you wrote this for is very lucky, I once had the nerve to send a love letter like this, it never worked out but we are still very close friends, and he knows I love him very much, it may be different for you however, you never know until you try. Good luck!

Re: I Just Can't Explain How or Why (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_4_eternity on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:10:55 PM AEST
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You'd be lying to this person if you didn't show them how much they mean to you... so maybe not technically a lie, but I hope you get where I'm coming from... this was a really heartfelt write, and I hope you give it to the person, because do you really want to wonder "what if?" your whole life? Live life to the fullest, take the risk, you won't regret it.

Re: I Just Can't Explain How or Why (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:22:19 AM AEST
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well i want to tell you that from my own experecnce its better to tell them, rather to keep it hidden, i had a secret love for someone and i never told him and its been a year since i've seen him i spend every day wishing i could have. But i also had the most amazing crush on this guy for 5 years and never told him a word, here is the kicker on this one we have been a great couple for a month now,
put this says it all good write

Tasha

Re: I Just Can't Explain How or Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Hollow_Eyed_Girl on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:40:01 AM AEST
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Beautiful...cuz i know exactly how you feel. never has it been eplained in word so well. thank you!

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