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Array ( [sid] => 102683 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My bloody tears [time] => 2005-08-04 20:54:54 [hometext] => Dont ask me what I was thinking.............O_O [bodytext] => I go to you for love and care,
you push me away with hate,
you turn your back on me.
I burst into tears and run to you,
eyes drowning in tears,
trying to look into your eyes and understand why you turn away.
You glare at me,
I cant take the pain,
my heart bursts inside me.
I cant speak,
I cant think,
I fall on my face.
I try to stand,
I try to stand strong,
but the hurt is too deep.
You look back at me with cold eyes,
no emotions,
just one unforgetable look.
I feel the blood rushing at me skull,
I try to open my eyes,
tears of blood drown my face.
I try to wipe them away,
but they wont go away,
the just keep coming down.
My hurt and saddness,
turns into to hate,
my heart hardens deeply.
I lick my fingers and grin,
I grab a knife,
I jab it in your neck.
Your eyes fill with fear,
you try to speak to me,
what are you trying to say? sorry?
I drop my knife,
a grasp my hands around your throat,
a grasp tighter and tighter.
I let you go and walk away,
you see that tears of blood that I left on the floor,
you drop to your knees.
You know,
you understand well,
you took out your anger on me.
It sinks into my heart,
it becomes soft again,
alone I sit and cry tears of blood............again.
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My bloody tears

Contributed by HiddenDeath999 on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:54:54 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I go to you for love and care,
you push me away with hate,
you turn your back on me.
I burst into tears and run to you,
eyes drowning in tears,
trying to look into your eyes and understand why you turn away.
You glare at me,
I cant take the pain,
my heart bursts inside me.
I cant speak,
I cant think,
I fall on my face.
I try to stand,
I try to stand strong,
but the hurt is too deep.
You look back at me with cold eyes,
no emotions,
just one unforgetable look.
I feel the blood rushing at me skull,
I try to open my eyes,
tears of blood drown my face.
I try to wipe them away,
but they wont go away,
the just keep coming down.
My hurt and saddness,
turns into to hate,
my heart hardens deeply.
I lick my fingers and grin,
I grab a knife,
I jab it in your neck.
Your eyes fill with fear,
you try to speak to me,
what are you trying to say? sorry?
I drop my knife,
a grasp my hands around your throat,
a grasp tighter and tighter.
I let you go and walk away,
you see that tears of blood that I left on the floor,
you drop to your knees.
You know,
you understand well,
you took out your anger on me.
It sinks into my heart,
it becomes soft again,
alone I sit and cry tears of blood............again.




Copyright © HiddenDeath999 ... [ 2005-08-04 20:54:54]
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Re: My bloody tears (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:19:32 PM AEST
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Oh the bitter pain of rejection.......can make a person resort to any kind of revenge.

Indeed, a powerful write.

Good job.


Re: My bloody tears (User Rating: 1 )
by silenceinthestorm on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 10:59:58 PM AEST
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this one hit home


Re: My bloody tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Saint_41 on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:25:38 PM AEST
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I like this one. I see the power in your words


Re: My bloody tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:11:08 AM AEST
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Very nicely done.




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