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Array ( [sid] => 102750 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Ghost Of You....... [time] => 2005-08-05 14:38:05 [hometext] => Never realised ghosts do exsist, until the one I love so dear left to his own country n left a hole in me heart....... [bodytext] => Your ghost wandering
In this empty house
Hearing your footsteps
As you walk down the stairs

Your scent still lingering
When I curl meself up
In this blanket of mine
Whom held your body warm

The thoughts of you
Frozen in time
Dearly treasured,
Making me heart smile

Feeling warm inside
Thinking of you,
Wishing me "Good Morning"
With a smile upon your face

Your ghost lingering down the stairs
Surrounding me with precious memories
Making me feel so close,
To the ghost of you.....

~~Nats~~ [comments] => 7 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 2 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Ghost Of You.......

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Your ghost wandering
In this empty house
Hearing your footsteps
As you walk down the stairs

Your scent still lingering
When I curl meself up
In this blanket of mine
Whom held your body warm

The thoughts of you
Frozen in time
Dearly treasured,
Making me heart smile

Feeling warm inside
Thinking of you,
Wishing me "Good Morning"
With a smile upon your face

Your ghost lingering down the stairs
Surrounding me with precious memories
Making me feel so close,
To the ghost of you.....

~~Nats~~

Copyright © xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx ... [ 2005-08-05 14:38:05]
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Re: The Ghost Of You....... (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:56:42 PM AEST
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this brought a tear to my eye

Re: The Ghost Of You....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:04:42 PM AEST
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I wrote a song called "Memory" and your poem reminds me of that song. This is indeed a good write.

Re: The Ghost Of You....... (User Rating: 1 )
by rosethorn100 on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:25:31 PM AEST
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aww nats this brought tears to my eyes, i knew it would be hard at first, am sure u missing him like mad, but one thing for sure u can treasure the moments u spent with him.

Hope u both can meet again
hugggggggggs

Rosey

Re: The Ghost Of You....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:48:08 AM AEST
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People can leave such a powerful resonence in out lives, can't they? - lovers, children, parents, even enemies. You captured the issue and emotion well within your poem. Straight away it elicited the very same feelings for my loved ones, departed for many different reasons.

Spike

Re: The Ghost Of You....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 05:16:50 PM AEST
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Great Nats, you made me feel such a tremendous sentimental yearning for my own lost souls, but it's a peaceful yearning.
john

Re: The Ghost Of You....... (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:12:37 AM AEST
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I like the flow
well done

Re: The Ghost Of You....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:15:03 PM AEST
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Wonderful to read. You brought us to your home with great imagery and your heart & soul revealed through great descriptive expressions of love.

Very gifted write and a privilege you shared it with us.

Thank you,

Tim
:)

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