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dripping down my cheeks
the drops
that so perfectly match
the deep red ones
both show the pain
and the hate
both so perfect
slowly running down my skin
both so beautiful
putting a grain of something good
something, one thing, beautiful
in my life
that is otherwise
so ugly
so full of hurt
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two kinds of tears

Contributed by all_that_i_can_be on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:32:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

the salty tears
dripping down my cheeks
the drops
that so perfectly match
the deep red ones
both show the pain
and the hate
both so perfect
slowly running down my skin
both so beautiful
putting a grain of something good
something, one thing, beautiful
in my life
that is otherwise
so ugly
so full of hurt

Copyright © all_that_i_can_be ... [ 2005-08-06 03:32:07]
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Re: two kinds of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:57:21 AM AEST
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The-brokn-rose. I understand where you are going with this, I cry regular salty tears when I am happy, but if I am depressed, mad, in pain, or sad, I cry tears that feel like blood. Yes the tears stream down my face.

Almost cried tonight, hard to believe, sometimes when I cry, my tears feel as if they bleed, one by one they stream down my face, dry red tears, feel as if they burn, feels like fear. SLipSiX.

Re: two kinds of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:58:40 AM AEST
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Great poem I think Broken_nose Described it perfectly

Re: two kinds of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:20:36 PM AEST
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I think he meant broken_rose .. I'm laughing at the broken nose thing .. but it was a great write...

Re: two kinds of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 09:16:21 PM AEST
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I believe that tears are a universal language. When we see them, the hurt shines thru the eyes and the streaks--call to me.

Your poem said so very much. Yes it did.

Kie

Re: two kinds of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:26:07 AM AEST
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such painful emotions expressed so well your writting is indeed moving another side of poetry in which the heart reveals it's true nature, whish u well . . .

Ben

Re: two kinds of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:18:46 PM AEST
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The simplicity of this poem is striking. In so few words such hurt and release of pain is described perfectly. Excellent write, I wouldn't change a thing.

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