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Array ( [sid] => 102907 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => slip away [time] => 2005-08-07 13:01:08 [hometext] => written after hearing the song...somewhere in your heart [bodytext] => i never met
anyone like you
anyone who could put up with me
the way that you do

but here i am alone again
at the end of another lonely day
and im crying little girl...cos...
it feels like youre slipping away...

plz dont plz dont...slip away
plz dont plz dont...i want you to stay
plz dont plz dont...slip away...
but if you leave me girl, theres somewhere in my heart...
you always will stay!

i hold you in my heart
God holds us in His hands
and i know, you know, without a doubt
we are part of His plan

and its so stupid of me
to have, any worries or fears
but when i think of you leaving me girl
my eyes fill with tears...so...

plz dont plz dont slip away
plz dont plz dont, i want you to stay
plz dont plz dont, slip away
but if you leave me girl, theres somewhere in my heart
you always will stay

somewhere in your heart...try n find a place for me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Don [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
slip away

Contributed by Don on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:01:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



i never met
anyone like you
anyone who could put up with me
the way that you do

but here i am alone again
at the end of another lonely day
and im crying little girl...cos...
it feels like youre slipping away...

plz dont plz dont...slip away
plz dont plz dont...i want you to stay
plz dont plz dont...slip away...
but if you leave me girl, theres somewhere in my heart...
you always will stay!

i hold you in my heart
God holds us in His hands
and i know, you know, without a doubt
we are part of His plan

and its so stupid of me
to have, any worries or fears
but when i think of you leaving me girl
my eyes fill with tears...so...

plz dont plz dont slip away
plz dont plz dont, i want you to stay
plz dont plz dont, slip away
but if you leave me girl, theres somewhere in my heart
you always will stay

somewhere in your heart...try n find a place for me




Copyright © Don ... [ 2005-08-07 13:01:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: slip away (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:28:34 PM AEST
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First to comment on your song.I liked this very much but think it would read better if you actually wrote out the word please.good luck with the writing, Ros


Re: slip away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:20:57 PM AEST
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Full sounds and rhythm, deep human cadences

I sang the words.. Nice voice, nice sound

RLPoetess ; ))




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