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Array ( [sid] => 102972 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FAKE!!! [time] => 2005-08-08 02:33:05 [hometext] => its about a girl who pretends to be something shes not. no one knows how much misery she goes through. plz read [bodytext] => So dark
in the amber sky
is a girl
that lives a lie
pretending to be
something shes not
inside life
isnt a lot
people ask
whats wrong
she smilies
and moves along
they look
in her eyes
but they dont see
behind the disuise
her scars are covered
so no one has discovered
but she goes home
and cuts so deep
she lays in bed
crying herself to sleep
the misery
got to her head
the next day
they found her dead
they finnally knew the truth
after she couldnt wake
on her wrist
she carved im a fake.....

please comment!!!!! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 13 [informant] => life_goes_on900 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

FAKE!!!

Contributed by life_goes_on900 on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:33:05 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

So dark
in the amber sky
is a girl
that lives a lie
pretending to be
something shes not
inside life
isnt a lot
people ask
whats wrong
she smilies
and moves along
they look
in her eyes
but they dont see
behind the disuise
her scars are covered
so no one has discovered
but she goes home
and cuts so deep
she lays in bed
crying herself to sleep
the misery
got to her head
the next day
they found her dead
they finnally knew the truth
after she couldnt wake
on her wrist
she carved im a fake.....

please comment!!!!!

Copyright © life_goes_on900 ... [ 2005-08-08 02:33:05]
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Re: FAKE!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:39:30 AM AEST
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Wow, powerful. Unfortuantely it reminds me of me but luckily i'm still alive. great poem. lots of emotion. One criticism: check your spelling

Brooke

Re: FAKE!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 03:42:45 AM AEST
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it's convensing enuff to break my heart.
huggs,
emy

Re: FAKE!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by SiLeNtxxThunder on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:40:30 AM AEST
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nicely done

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