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Eyes looked into mine with silent words,
Your tears spoke volumes of marriage in vain.

A pane of red sank softly into a lead sparkled line,
Love deeply washing over the blood colored sand,
Your heart opened forth to mine with a crimson shine.

A pane of white crept into the sun drenched expanse,
Lips speaking kisses when brushed across the divide,
Your body felt warm as our souls clutched and advanced.

A pane of green shone bright as light glanced divine,
Hands embraced and bodies entwined,
Your love was true but life said nay with bitter sublime.

A window of pain showed off its colored glass panes,
Two hearts were broken at the dusk of day,
Love lost and found in multicolored leaded lanes.

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Stained Glass Pane

Contributed by EricBRamey on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:20:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A pane of blue appeared upon the glassy plain,
Eyes looked into mine with silent words,
Your tears spoke volumes of marriage in vain.

A pane of red sank softly into a lead sparkled line,
Love deeply washing over the blood colored sand,
Your heart opened forth to mine with a crimson shine.

A pane of white crept into the sun drenched expanse,
Lips speaking kisses when brushed across the divide,
Your body felt warm as our souls clutched and advanced.

A pane of green shone bright as light glanced divine,
Hands embraced and bodies entwined,
Your love was true but life said nay with bitter sublime.

A window of pain showed off its colored glass panes,
Two hearts were broken at the dusk of day,
Love lost and found in multicolored leaded lanes.

Copyright © EricBRamey ... [ 2005-08-08 21:20:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stained Glass Pane (User Rating: 1 )
by Unbreakable on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:27:59 PM AEST
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Great write...I love everything about it, from the symbolism in the colours to the refreshing rhyme scheme. Great work, keep it up..

Krystal

Re: Stained Glass Pane (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:59:47 PM AEST
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Composed wonderfully.....

this is a splendid piece of poetry...well done to you!

A pleasure to read ..

Re: Stained Glass Pane (User Rating: 1 )
by THORN on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:42:23 AM AEST
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Unbelievable. Literally speechless. That was breath-taking!! I am so sorry to hear so. Your poetry came straight with the heart. Strong vocabulary with talented rhyme.
Nicely layed out too.

Take care 'n' Good luck,
-xXRayeXx

Re: Stained Glass Pane (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:27:33 AM AEST
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Well done...loved the use of the colours here.
Jenni

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