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Array ( [sid] => 103036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I need you [time] => 2005-08-08 22:40:15 [hometext] => This is to those on my other half who don't care. [bodytext] => They say blood
is thicker than water,
but with you
it can't get no thinner.

Were suspose to be family,
We share no common boundaries
but the blood
that flows through our veins.

When it comes to you,
there's no love for me.
You spend all of your time
hating me,
instead of being
that postive rolemodel in my life.

Look into my eyes,
can't you see the little girl
that yearns for you.
The one that wants you
to be there.

So much pain
stands between us.
Why won't you put your ignorance aside
and realize
that I don't need an enemy?
I need a brother,
a sister,
I need you.
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I need you

Contributed by smilez101 on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:40:15 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

They say blood
is thicker than water,
but with you
it can't get no thinner.

Were suspose to be family,
We share no common boundaries
but the blood
that flows through our veins.

When it comes to you,
there's no love for me.
You spend all of your time
hating me,
instead of being
that postive rolemodel in my life.

Look into my eyes,
can't you see the little girl
that yearns for you.
The one that wants you
to be there.

So much pain
stands between us.
Why won't you put your ignorance aside
and realize
that I don't need an enemy?
I need a brother,
a sister,
I need you.

Copyright © smilez101 ... [ 2005-08-08 22:40:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I need you (User Rating: 1 )
by EricBRamey on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:51:53 PM AEST
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Wow...heavy stuff. I hope things work out with those you love...family pain is the worst kind!!! Thanks for the poem.

Re: I need you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:18:08 PM AEST
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Very sad yet qwesomely touching.
huggs,
emy

Re: I need you (User Rating: 1 )
by SiLeNtxxThunder on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:25:26 PM AEST
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that reminds me of the relationship between me and my sister, well done.

Re: I need you (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:00:49 PM AEST
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wow this is a strong write, i reely hope u n ur family come to an understanding and learn to love one another cuz u no if all ur friends dump u 2 morro u will always have ur family 2 fall back on ya no?? well good luck darlin!

Jenni xxoo

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