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imprisoned in a cell
hidden amongst the shadows
lies my twisted hell

waiting in an abyss
for something thats not there
someone to understand me
& actually show they care

as if that'll happen
forever just a dream
because im the only one
who hears my silent scream

and my solitude grows worse
each & everyday
breaking down my walls
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just a dream

Contributed by bleeding_corset on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:11:48 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

forever within the darkness
imprisoned in a cell
hidden amongst the shadows
lies my twisted hell

waiting in an abyss
for something thats not there
someone to understand me
& actually show they care

as if that'll happen
forever just a dream
because im the only one
who hears my silent scream

and my solitude grows worse
each & everyday
breaking down my walls
making me its prey

Copyright © bleeding_corset ... [ 2005-08-09 12:11:48]
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Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:34:42 PM AEST
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Great write. If you happen to read one of mine read "Staring into the abyss" I think you will like it.

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:56:21 PM AEST
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Very nice little piece. I quite enjoyed it. Peace to you. Laura

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by EricBRamey on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:27:36 PM AEST
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Harsh stuff...but the imagery is strong...and I can feel the pain in your words. I can't say I like your poem...it's not a "like" kind of write, but I respect it...thanks for the contribution...Eric

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:49:17 PM AEST
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I think we all have a silent scream that no one hears..
I liked your rhyme pattern..

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Writting_Fever on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:32:16 PM AEST
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everyone i bet feels like this once and a while. good write

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:59:04 PM AEST
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i felt your pain, good write

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:39:59 PM AEST
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I can feel the despair and pain in your words. I hope that this was wwritten during a hard time, and you are now better.

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 04:21:47 PM AEST
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I wrote a similar poem to this, I was feeling a
bit low at the time, hope you do not feel this way..Very good poem.

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:55:52 PM AEST
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amazing poem from the first stanza to the last. excellent piece of work here. your first stanza i really liked the most in this. your ending was very good indeed. a good concept well portrayed.

Re: just a dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 04:07:58 PM AEST
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I reallyt like this one, especially the first stanza. I do wish it would go on more, it almost doesn't seem like it's finished. If you ever write more for this, please let me know.
Take care.
David

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