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Array ( [sid] => 103119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shall we dance? [time] => 2005-08-09 22:01:06 [hometext] => the demon is forever near... [bodytext] => from one port to the next
the demon is a seductress
what will you do
when she wraps her red desire around you?
will you faint or run away?
or will you dance with the catalyst or your pain?

images of her dreams
blinding your conscience from safer means
waltzing to the ground of death
love is among your last breath

grips of the black chain
holds back your fight to be sane
under her spell, caught in her trap
the demon has you and you'll never go back

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Shall we dance?

Contributed by guiltycircles on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:01:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

from one port to the next
the demon is a seductress
what will you do
when she wraps her red desire around you?
will you faint or run away?
or will you dance with the catalyst or your pain?

images of her dreams
blinding your conscience from safer means
waltzing to the ground of death
love is among your last breath

grips of the black chain
holds back your fight to be sane
under her spell, caught in her trap
the demon has you and you'll never go back

Copyright © guiltycircles ... [ 2005-08-09 22:01:06]
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Re: Shall we dance? (User Rating: 1 )
by AshRayne on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:30:07 AM AEST
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wow! that was intrigueing!(hope i spelled that right...) good poem, ciao

Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.

~Ash

Re: Shall we dance? (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 04:43:55 PM AEST
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waltzing to the ground of death
love is among your last breath

another deliciously artful line from you...

i like the line about red desire as well...

this was a poem that surrounded me with evil darkness and seduction that left my thighs shaking with a sweet lust, gasping for anything but air and tasting sweet blood between my teeth...

Re: Shall we dance? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:00:32 AM AEST
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brilliant poem, I loved It,,,,,

Re: Shall we dance? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:05:59 AM AEST
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Powerful. Absolutely loved it

Re: Shall we dance? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 03:12:03 AM AEST
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Great write. It was very intense. I really loved the flow.

Re: Shall we dance? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:19:49 PM AEST
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Hey,
Thanx so much for commenting on my poem.
I really loved this it just surounded me and i could just imagine... well everything!
Good job
till next time
emz

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