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Why do you want to end it I wonder,
I love so much, it tears my heart to shreds,
Life is hard and without you it would be harder,
Throwing your life away to be six feet under.

Does my love mean so little to you,
Doing drugs and being with others,
My heart is trapped in your soul baby,
Giving it away to be six feet under.

I talk so much...I feel absurd,
Do my words get through,
Or do they fall short as tears fall unheard,
Cold as ground that lies six feet under.

I barely know what you're going through,
But I want to understand,
I love you so much that words seem hollow,
Putting my heart...six feet under.

~ Eric B. Ramey ~

Copyright ©2005 Eric B. Ramey

~ Holly...Always ~

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Six Feet Under. . .

Contributed by EricBRamey on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 06:51:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Why do you want to end it I wonder,
I love so much, it tears my heart to shreds,
Life is hard and without you it would be harder,
Throwing your life away to be six feet under.

Does my love mean so little to you,
Doing drugs and being with others,
My heart is trapped in your soul baby,
Giving it away to be six feet under.

I talk so much...I feel absurd,
Do my words get through,
Or do they fall short as tears fall unheard,
Cold as ground that lies six feet under.

I barely know what you're going through,
But I want to understand,
I love you so much that words seem hollow,
Putting my heart...six feet under.

~ Eric B. Ramey ~

Copyright ©2005 Eric B. Ramey

~ Holly...Always ~

Copyright Â© EricBRamey ... [ 2005-08-10 18:51:03]
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Re: Six Feet Under. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:47:25 PM AEST
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A very good poem, I loved it, the six feet under after the stanzas seem to have got me excited, I felt the emotion through out this poem and I can say that I relate to it. Hope everything gets better for you, HugGLes. SLipSiX.

Re: Six Feet Under. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Sbhottie288 on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:59:25 PM AEST
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strong poem... i know how it feels... i sometimes wonder about my ex.. but just wanted to say good poem..

keep them coming...

Re: Six Feet Under. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_fighter_chick on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:26:19 PM AEST
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That is sweet. I can relate to it alot because this girl i liked alot was always in a bad relationship. She always hooked up with people that only wanted her for sex, and when i told her i loved her, she was already messed up in the head, and couln't believe me, and i watch her fall time and time again. i just keep giving her my hand again, but she'll never truly believe me.

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