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MY TOUCH
Contributed by
Nita
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:45:56 AM in AEST
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A legion of mysteries
Whom so many adore
I too, erupt within your fantasies
Lusting through darkness, intriguing for more
In every sensual word I breathe
My essence is bared between the fables you portray
Becoming entangled in thoughts of pleasure
I read to discover the nature you convey
Reaching out to comfort
You breached my heart of ice
Sharing your whispers at a distance
I know, you too have reaped loves price
A Casanova of dreams
Still ravelling from the one you lost
You will chance upon another, my friend
Consummating your trust is worth the cost
My touch is to bring you solace
Traversing from the spirits of eternal youth
A prominent beginning to no end
For our souls only speak in truth
Copyright ©
Nita
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2005-08-14 09:45:56]
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Re: MY TOUCH
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 09:59:45 AM AEST
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Hi Nita, I'm sure your friend will find a lot of solace from your beautiful verse. You also make me want to read his poetry!
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Re: MY TOUCH
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by bernard2 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:15:43 AM AEST
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| Nita this I found to be a fitting tribute to a friend. I enjoyed reading your poem very much bernard2 |
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Re: MY TOUCH
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:00:03 PM AEST
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| lovely tribute |
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Re: MY TOUCH
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by LadyLikeAtTimes on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:26:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, ripe with emotion. All in all lovely tribute.
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Re: MY TOUCH
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:57:51 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and very touching. Hopefully he will find strength to begin the journey back to health. God bless.
Rita |
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