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There used to be anger in every word that came from me
I used to not believe in miracles or dreams come true
But that was before I ever found you

The day we met I went through change
I felt the love in me start to break through
And I felt the darkness moving too
Ever since then I've been in love with you

My faith used to not be very strong it was like a rusted chain
There used to be a sound of hatred in my words
It didn't matter which they were, a holy or a dark word
But that was before I ever found you

The day we met I went through change
My faith became like tempered steel
And my soul started to begin to heal
And now my love for you is so unreal

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The Day We Met

Contributed by Stalkee on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I used to be full of darkness, I used to be so cold
There used to be anger in every word that came from me
I used to not believe in miracles or dreams come true
But that was before I ever found you

The day we met I went through change
I felt the love in me start to break through
And I felt the darkness moving too
Ever since then I've been in love with you

My faith used to not be very strong it was like a rusted chain
There used to be a sound of hatred in my words
It didn't matter which they were, a holy or a dark word
But that was before I ever found you

The day we met I went through change
My faith became like tempered steel
And my soul started to begin to heal
And now my love for you is so unreal

Copyright © Stalkee ... [ 2003-01-14 04:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Day We Met (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 04:18:08 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful...full of emotion and such beauty....welcome to YPDC i look forward to reading more of your poetry...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: The Day We Met (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 07:02:47 PM AEST
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hey, thanks for the read, the compliments, and the welcome!!! =)

Re: The Day We Met (User Rating: 1 )
by RealCrystal on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 12:21:27 PM AEST
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This is a great write, it hit me close to the heart.

R.C.

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