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Array ( [sid] => 103579 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I don’t know why [time] => 2005-08-15 18:15:14 [hometext] => Many of us do things in an instant, sometimes these things are good, and others are not. We cannot control our initial reactions, and we sometimes regret them. [bodytext] => You left me alone in the shadows,
You toyed within my head.
You wanted me to love you.
And I don’t know why I did.

I don’t understand.
What did you find wrong?
It took me too long.

To realize,
That this was not my fault.
I should have kept my heart.

I was lost,
In a world of light,
Somehow it didn’t seem right.

It was beautiful,
It was meant to be,
I wanted you here with me.

It was great,
It was perfect,
Until the night you came.

You were special,
In my eyes,
You filled me with surprise.

But especially that night,
When you told me it was over.
You left me in the dust.

Out the door,
Say no more.
You don’t want to deal with me.

I stood there,
In the shadows,
No tears fell, from my eyes.

I held back, until morning.
When I couldn’t hold,
No more.

No more.

It hurt me,
Can’t you see?
This is wrong.

I want you back,
Come home to me,
Come back and set me free.

In my dreams,
I always pictured,
You and me.

I’m locked inside,
I was mesmerized,
How could you do this to me?

You left me alone in the dark,
My mind was blowin’ apart.
You know you done me wrong.
You know you done me wrong

You left me alone in the shadows,
You toyed within my head.
You wanted me to love you.
And I don’t know why I did.
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I don’t know why

Contributed by AshRayne on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 06:15:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You left me alone in the shadows,
You toyed within my head.
You wanted me to love you.
And I don’t know why I did.

I don’t understand.
What did you find wrong?
It took me too long.

To realize,
That this was not my fault.
I should have kept my heart.

I was lost,
In a world of light,
Somehow it didn’t seem right.

It was beautiful,
It was meant to be,
I wanted you here with me.

It was great,
It was perfect,
Until the night you came.

You were special,
In my eyes,
You filled me with surprise.

But especially that night,
When you told me it was over.
You left me in the dust.

Out the door,
Say no more.
You don’t want to deal with me.

I stood there,
In the shadows,
No tears fell, from my eyes.

I held back, until morning.
When I couldn’t hold,
No more.

No more.

It hurt me,
Can’t you see?
This is wrong.

I want you back,
Come home to me,
Come back and set me free.

In my dreams,
I always pictured,
You and me.

I’m locked inside,
I was mesmerized,
How could you do this to me?

You left me alone in the dark,
My mind was blowin’ apart.
You know you done me wrong.
You know you done me wrong

You left me alone in the shadows,
You toyed within my head.
You wanted me to love you.
And I don’t know why I did.




Copyright © AshRayne ... [ 2005-08-15 18:15:14]
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Re: I don’t know why (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 06:30:04 PM AEST
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Very nice, heartfelt, good job.


Re: I don’t know why (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:25:43 AM AEST
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A great write flowing and specific, straight from the heart portrays a very revealing veiw
of loves anguished reality . . .

Ben




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