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Array ( [sid] => 103721 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Strength is failing [time] => 2005-08-17 09:13:17 [hometext] => havent writen in like forever,...yeah its not great but i had to let some emotion out. tough time you know [bodytext] => Sometimes i wonder where i went
i lay down beside you and feel so complete
but when we part i lose my mind
my heart breaks every day till we meet again.

I used to be strong, i remember i could do anything
before i met you
now i cant handle missing you, i wish i didnt
i hate how i feel so alone even when your on the phone
i know its not for long
but every day without you feels like an eternity
I cry deep down inside
careful not to let more tears than are allowed.

I love you more than anything and i know you feel the same
but when i am here without you
my world falls apart
I know it could be worse, i know i could lose you
but baby please understand
i dont mean to hurt you when i cry on the phone,
its not you who hurts me,
its my strenght beginning to fail. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 32 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Strength is failing

Contributed by gery_giggles on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:13:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Sometimes i wonder where i went
i lay down beside you and feel so complete
but when we part i lose my mind
my heart breaks every day till we meet again.

I used to be strong, i remember i could do anything
before i met you
now i cant handle missing you, i wish i didnt
i hate how i feel so alone even when your on the phone
i know its not for long
but every day without you feels like an eternity
I cry deep down inside
careful not to let more tears than are allowed.

I love you more than anything and i know you feel the same
but when i am here without you
my world falls apart
I know it could be worse, i know i could lose you
but baby please understand
i dont mean to hurt you when i cry on the phone,
its not you who hurts me,
its my strenght beginning to fail.




Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2005-08-17 09:13:17]
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Re: Strength is failing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 10:05:13 AM AEST
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Beautiful...
Leaves me speechless because thats so much of whats in me..
All we can do is pray for Strength and God to light our way..
Ty 4 sharin..
~~~Michelle~~~


Re: Strength is failing (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:09:01 PM AEST
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Hi giggles! this is the first time I've read your poems and now I'll have to go back and find more. This is so expressive of your feelings and I think it's great.

"careful not to let more tears than are allowed" Don't put a limit on your tears, just cry until you're through!

Try to turn that love you have for each other into you're strength, it's a special gift so why not use it?
Keep up the writing, john


Re: Strength is failing (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 07:20:26 PM AEST
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You can't be strong in any sort of relationship until you are strong standing on your own.
Love isn't about needing someone else to feel whole, it's about sharing your life with someone who truly appreciates it.

You'll be just fine.
Take care,
Lizzie




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