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Array ( [sid] => 103819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind the Smile [time] => 2005-08-18 08:55:07 [hometext] => This poem is dedicated to my bestfriend, Jenna Paola Alvarez. I just want her to know that I love her so much to see the pain underneath her smile. I hope she gets to read this. [bodytext] =>
I see your tears as though they were my own
With each moment that you are alone
I feel your pain as though the wound was mine
Given the chance, I壇 make everything fine
And I know that it痴 been quite a while
Since the last time I saw your true smile
Now you just wear a mask of happiness
Hoping that it would cover the loneliness
That I see through the mask that you wear
I feel the pain you can no longer bear
I want you to know that I知 here for you
Each time you cry, I値l be crying too
And let your tears fall on my shoulder
I値l always be here to make things better
And you will always find a friend in me
Sharing the pain that others fail to see
So please, I beg you, give me one chance
To ease the pain made by lost romance
I値l help you recover, I値l help you fight
I値l comfort you, I値l kiss you goodnight
I値l give you everything that you need
Love, care, time, even the air that I breathe
I壇 gladly die if it would help you live
There痴 no limit to what I知 willing to give
For you to be truly happy is all that I ask
And see a real smile underneath your mask


- Butch-
-The Betrayer of Hope-
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 16 [informant] => ButchCorpuz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Behind the Smile

Contributed by ButchCorpuz on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:55:07 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry




I see your tears as though they were my own
With each moment that you are alone
I feel your pain as though the wound was mine
Given the chance, I壇 make everything fine
And I know that it痴 been quite a while
Since the last time I saw your true smile
Now you just wear a mask of happiness
Hoping that it would cover the loneliness
That I see through the mask that you wear
I feel the pain you can no longer bear
I want you to know that I知 here for you
Each time you cry, I値l be crying too
And let your tears fall on my shoulder
I値l always be here to make things better
And you will always find a friend in me
Sharing the pain that others fail to see
So please, I beg you, give me one chance
To ease the pain made by lost romance
I値l help you recover, I値l help you fight
I値l comfort you, I値l kiss you goodnight
I値l give you everything that you need
Love, care, time, even the air that I breathe
I壇 gladly die if it would help you live
There痴 no limit to what I知 willing to give
For you to be truly happy is all that I ask
And see a real smile underneath your mask


- Butch-
-The Betrayer of Hope-




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Re: Behind the Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 09:02:08 AM AEST
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Aww.... this is a beautiful write.

I think you should show her this, you never know she could feel the same way.


Re: Behind the Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 10:54:54 AM AEST
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You are a very loving friend to Jena, i hope she relizes that soon rather then later
a very good emotional write keep it up
All my love, hope and wishes
Jenny
xxx


Re: Behind the Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:30:32 AM AEST
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i wish someone felt that way torwards me...i really like your poem, the person u are writng this to should be very happy that she has you in her life...i would be!

~dreamer~


Re: Behind the Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by MarLites on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:17:23 AM AEST
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Oh my goodness this was great. I envision my guy writing this for me. She must be very special show it to her. And I like your title better Why I won't forget. Thanks for reading.




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