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Ready to overtake my mind.
My tears flow like a river,
Threatening to leave me behind.

I don't know how to stop it,
Or what I'm supposed to do.
There must be some solution.
Why can't this just be through?

Please understand,
No don't cry!
This is my happy ending,
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My Happy Ending

Contributed by ell_03 on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 02:46:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

My fears grow like a weed,
Ready to overtake my mind.
My tears flow like a river,
Threatening to leave me behind.

I don't know how to stop it,
Or what I'm supposed to do.
There must be some solution.
Why can't this just be through?

Please understand,
No don't cry!
This is my happy ending,
Goodbye.

Copyright © ell_03 ... [ 2005-08-18 14:46:33]
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Re: My Happy Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 04:49:02 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem. I really hope that you dont follow in her footsteps.

Re: My Happy Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 05:59:45 PM AEST
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this made me cry. i have felt this way before and got close to dying and so i can understand the pain here. i wish she could have held on a bit longer, but perhaps the pain was too strong. peace and love to gain understanding and strength through your loss. *hugs*
luv, Kortnie

Re: My Happy Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:28:25 AM AEST
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This is so frigging sad, dammit I wish she would have been strong...times change, things change as we age. I remember when I was younger around that age; 14, not wanting to go on. Thank goodness I did. This is just so wrong, I look at my kids and hope they never feel that way about life. Peace to you, my sympathy to you and your friend's family, this is so tragic, Laura

Re: My Happy Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by BloodyTears5 on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:18:40 AM AEST
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very sad but very pretty. im sorry for you lost

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