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TOO LATE
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 06:24:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why do the years creep up on you
as if in some cheap horror flick-
and your'e the chick--
the one that doesn't make it
But you still fake it-
UNAWARE
of anything real
because nothing's real anymore-
Except the first appearance of crows feet
and outlines of frowns-
from so many years of depression
and the suppression
of things once longed for-
but exist no more
for me
once me
just me
no me
free me
PLEASE
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
... [
2005-08-18 18:24:33]
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Re: TOO LATE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 06:43:16 PM AEST
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| Very well written. The emotion in this comes across so clear. sad, but i can relate. Like i said, beutifuly done. |
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Re: TOO LATE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 07:24:57 PM AEST
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| i agree with the first comment...sad but very well written...this poem is the truest thing about life |
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Re: TOO LATE
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by artjunkiekyle on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 01:32:44 PM AEST
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you have a talent that is so real and vivid. great write thanks for posting
-kyle |
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Re: TOO LATE
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by northernlights on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 10:36:04 AM AEST
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| lovely quirky write about the reality of life and how we deal with it really enjoyed this |
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