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by Robert Davidson

Hanging on my wall beside my bed
Self-mutilation
Brings things into perspective

My hand broken from punching the wall
I hurt myself to ease the pain
So deep into my throbbing mind
I need to get it out

Tears of blood fall and shatter on my window
Like drops of glass from a distance
As a bus explodes
And nails my feelings to my door

Living in a dying world of bleeding souls
Terror bombs stalk my streets
I see my nightmares become reality

I see the future with a frightened eye
Raging fires everywhere, my walls closing in
Life is the nightmare world we're all dying to live

(This poem was written shortly after the London terrorist
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'NIGHTMARE WORLD'

Contributed by robertdavidson on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 06:20:20 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

'NIGHTMARE WORLD'

by Robert Davidson

Hanging on my wall beside my bed
Self-mutilation
Brings things into perspective

My hand broken from punching the wall
I hurt myself to ease the pain
So deep into my throbbing mind
I need to get it out

Tears of blood fall and shatter on my window
Like drops of glass from a distance
As a bus explodes
And nails my feelings to my door

Living in a dying world of bleeding souls
Terror bombs stalk my streets
I see my nightmares become reality

I see the future with a frightened eye
Raging fires everywhere, my walls closing in
Life is the nightmare world we're all dying to live

(This poem was written shortly after the London terrorist
attack on July 7 2005).

Copyright © robertdavidson ... [ 2005-08-20 06:20:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: 'NIGHTMARE WORLD' (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 11:02:12 AM AEST
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Great poem

full of fealing

sad but brilliant

Re: 'NIGHTMARE WORLD' (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeturos on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:57:41 PM AEST
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Anger, anguish, and despair- all captured wonderfully.

Re: 'NIGHTMARE WORLD' (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 08:50:43 PM AEST
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very angry, but very beautiful

Re: 'NIGHTMARE WORLD' (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:44:52 PM AEST
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Oh yes.. I like this one because of the anger you expressed goes hand in hand with the anger of our world.. this write is deep.

The images you placed before my eyes is dynamic..

I love the use of symbols in this write.. your fist of blood, the tears, the terror.. all pain and blood..

Where does it stop.. or when.. terrible tragedies going on, even now as I write..

Your reader friend,

RLPoetess ; ))

Re: 'NIGHTMARE WORLD' (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:50:43 PM AEST
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oopse sorry, I need to comment twice, because I still had more to say..

Robert,

Excellent work.. my feelings come out in writing.. wish I could just fist up one of these days lol..

I just love how you combine the two angers.. yours and the world.. this is really a wonderful write.. very, very brilliant..

RLPoetess ; ))

Re: 'NIGHTMARE WORLD' (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:18:48 AM AEST
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Very sad but unfortunatly reality.
Huggs,
emy

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