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Array ( [sid] => 104003 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seperate Ways [time] => 2005-08-20 12:00:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If you’re mad, get mad.
But I cant walk no more this lonely path.
So what if we’re together, we never shared the love we had.
Its just a habit, of being together.
But you know, it wont last forever.
So im gonna make the first step.
No, this choice I wont regret.
What makes me wonder, is that you cant see
What’s going on between you and me.
Im not afraid of being alone.
It’s a good chance to become strong.
To take thing on my own.
You know?
What? you don’t think you will make it?
You know you can. Don’t fake it.
It’s a crime to stay together,
When we don’t love, cant love. We poison each other.
There’s no love, no emotions left inside.
Love has committed suicide.
Cant you see it?
So why do you want to continue this?
We have to choose our way, our own separate path.
So we can feel free. Cant you see that?
I know you’re scared, cause I’m scared too.
But in the end we’ll make it through [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 52 [informant] => vox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Seperate Ways

Contributed by vox on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:00:06 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

If you’re mad, get mad.
But I cant walk no more this lonely path.
So what if we’re together, we never shared the love we had.
Its just a habit, of being together.
But you know, it wont last forever.
So im gonna make the first step.
No, this choice I wont regret.
What makes me wonder, is that you cant see
What’s going on between you and me.
Im not afraid of being alone.
It’s a good chance to become strong.
To take thing on my own.
You know?
What? you don’t think you will make it?
You know you can. Don’t fake it.
It’s a crime to stay together,
When we don’t love, cant love. We poison each other.
There’s no love, no emotions left inside.
Love has committed suicide.
Cant you see it?
So why do you want to continue this?
We have to choose our way, our own separate path.
So we can feel free. Cant you see that?
I know you’re scared, cause I’m scared too.
But in the end we’ll make it through

Copyright Â© vox ... [ 2005-08-20 12:00:06]
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Re: Seperate Ways (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 02:01:22 PM AEST
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This is a good write....A fearful plead.

Re: Seperate Ways (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 03:13:50 PM AEST
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Excellent poem and very true, my ex and I had to choose our own seperate ways, because sometimes it could be for the best. Good write. SLipSiX.

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