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and they screw up a lucky few get second chances

but what about people like me
those that arent given a chance
pasted up in the pursuit of somthing better
not even given a chance tossed aside like we feel no pain

just give me a chance
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just give me a chance

Contributed by Doubtless_One on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:05:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

many of us are given chances in this life
and they screw up a lucky few get second chances

but what about people like me
those that arent given a chance
pasted up in the pursuit of somthing better
not even given a chance tossed aside like we feel no pain

just give me a chance
one slow never ending ever loving dance

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Re: just give me a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:15:48 AM AEST
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i really like your poem...but i also think everybody has a chance you just might not see it yet...it might be the girl you really wanna be with or you might just find somebody even better who will give you all the chances in the world!!

~dreamer~

Re: just give me a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:20:46 AM AEST
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nicely written. i can totally relate with you here.
you captured it perfectly with your words. great job

Re: just give me a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:27:26 AM AEST
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Things happen late in life for some of us. In a way this poem shows that we have to have patience in this life to survive. Great write.

Re: just give me a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:05:47 PM AEST
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The other 2 was right...she might give you a chance just not yet. Because some girls like to try other guys before they get to the perfect one. Its like a worm and theres so many fishes in the sea. something my mom always told me. Just wait or find someone till shes there for u. Good write.
Baby_Grl

Re: just give me a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by pickle on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:49:22 PM AEST
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hun.. its amanda. im sry for your loss. i know how much she ment to you... but shes gone now. and you know she hates you..... im soo sry. the only thing now is to let her go. and open up your eyes. cuz on of these days you'll see that the girl infront of you maybe the one that really cares for you. just open your eyes... plz cuz it hurts me to see you down in the bush

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