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Array ( [sid] => 104125 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Two Poems [time] => 2005-08-22 01:40:34 [hometext] => IM so depressed and these poems suck [bodytext] => If I where

If I were a poem that every one loved
You would be my words
If I were a song that could make every one smile
You would be my chorus
If I were a painting that made people think
You would be my colors
If I were a shooting star and some one made a wish
You would be that wish
If I were a prayer that some one made every night
You would be the miracle
If I am special or handsome in any way it is only
Because I have you
You are everything that is beautiful in side of me
You are my whole world

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => Edited due to breaking of site rules. Rules state one poem per 24 hour period. Please stick to this. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Two Poems

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:40:34 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I where

If I were a poem that every one loved
You would be my words
If I were a song that could make every one smile
You would be my chorus
If I were a painting that made people think
You would be my colors
If I were a shooting star and some one made a wish
You would be that wish
If I were a prayer that some one made every night
You would be the miracle
If I am special or handsome in any way it is only
Because I have you
You are everything that is beautiful in side of me
You are my whole world

Copyright Â© Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-08-22 01:40:34]
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Re: Two Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 02:03:16 AM AEST
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One there's nothing wrong with these poems and two why are u depressed?
Talk to me.
huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Two Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by BloodyTears5 on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 02:32:40 AM AEST
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i love both these poems they dont sucks they are very well written.

im depressed too dont let it get you down.

if you wanna talk im always welcome to listen..

~Sarah

Re: Two Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:03:39 AM AEST
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If I were everything to you that you are to me
I would be so more than happy
If I were some one that you could be with
Then I would be so for all eternity
But I just can’t see anything in me
That is worth being
If only I could be

You are john, and you know it, These poems are so beautiful, keep your head up and a smile on your face,please, *puppy dog eyes*, amazing writes, again they have left me speechless as most of poems do,muaw.

Re: Two Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 05:43:28 AM AEST
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Lovely Poems, very well writen.
Good work

Re: Two Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:05:15 AM AEST
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Dear Doriens_Picture:

You are much more than you know.. you have delighted and pleased our hearts with your write..

We readers will be everything for and to you.. and that makes you everything..

A most beautiful write.. filled with so much love and beauty.. I thank God that He placed you in our world.

Raquel Leah Poetess ; ))

Re: Two Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 05:16:36 AM AEST
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You can break that rule? lmao how? I wanna know. None the less good poem, much like the rest of your writting much appreciated for posting keep it up cant wait for more.

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