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not to ever change but,
honestly, I always want everything to stay the same.

Even though I know I should encourage you, Im afraid to lose you.
Im a hypocrite, I say things to hide the the way I feel, so instead of begging you to stay Ill say
chase after your dream, spread your enormous wings and fly away,
before the pain becomes too much for me.

Smiling like a billionaire Ill hope youre unaware
that the walls inside were caving in, and my world had come apart again.
I stood there praying not to let it show, not to let you know, that I wouldn't be very strong without you.

I wont be lost the next time you see me,
my pain will be gone, believe me I been trying, and I wouldnt want to move on without you. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 43 [informant] => RAGEyourDREAM [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 34 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Without You

Contributed by RAGEyourDREAM on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:54:13 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Its impossible
not to ever change but,
honestly, I always want everything to stay the same.

Even though I know I should encourage you, Im afraid to lose you.
Im a hypocrite, I say things to hide the the way I feel, so instead of begging you to stay Ill say
chase after your dream, spread your enormous wings and fly away,
before the pain becomes too much for me.

Smiling like a billionaire Ill hope youre unaware
that the walls inside were caving in, and my world had come apart again.
I stood there praying not to let it show, not to let you know, that I wouldn't be very strong without you.

I wont be lost the next time you see me,
my pain will be gone, believe me I been trying, and I wouldnt want to move on without you.

Copyright © RAGEyourDREAM ... [ 2005-08-23 12:54:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:05:24 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel. When I read this I think about the people I have had great friendships with. . .

This is awesome.

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:18:42 PM AEST
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Wow... This is awesome!! You expressed your emotions very well here.

For the past week I've been stuck on a poem that I'm writing to my best friend who recently got married and is moving away from the islands to live in the US....

I can truly identify with this. Thanks for sharing it...

Jenni

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:37:14 PM AEST
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Awww this is really sweet...You sound like a good friend, and you should tell him/her how you really feel...Good job with this write, you expressed your thoughts well. Keep it up!
Welcome to YPDC: )

Scorp.

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:47:12 PM AEST
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A very sweet poem.

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by chazthepoet on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:53:37 PM AEST
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sweet,
well written

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:12:24 PM AEST
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you have written a very meaningful post, and though you may have a tough time speaking your thoughts, you've done an awesome job writing them, so maybe u should share this poem with ur friend. Thanks for sharing!
juliette

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:34:24 AM AEST
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This poem brought back some memories for me, beutifully written, welcome to ypdc!!!

Leia36

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