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If I started to cry would you dry my eyes?
If I got hurt would you stop and help me?
If my heart was broken would you let me cry on your shoulder until it was over?
Would you forget me?
Would you ever ditch me?
Would you ever stop caring? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Calliope [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Will you?

Contributed by Calliope on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:26:45 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

May I ask you something?
If I started to cry would you dry my eyes?
If I got hurt would you stop and help me?
If my heart was broken would you let me cry on your shoulder until it was over?
Would you forget me?
Would you ever ditch me?
Would you ever stop caring?

Copyright © Calliope ... [ 2005-08-23 16:26:45]
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Re: Will you? (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:30:17 PM AEST
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this is such a sweet poem! i have a close male friend who is going out with my best friend and she thinks i have a crush on him but we just get on really well! i sometimes feel that i need a shoulder to cry on but i never know who to turn to! this poem is really well written and thank you for writting it! it has helped me a lot!
all my love hope and hugges
jenny
xxx

Re: Will you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:09:27 PM AEST
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Good write. I know how that feels and i always wander to myself if he would. Thanks for sharing.

Re: Will you? (User Rating: 1 )
by THEL0STDREAMER on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:12:11 PM AEST
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i know what this feels like, and i know that it hurts, and i also know that it isn't easy to let it out. good job =] i liked it

Re: Will you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:22:25 PM AEST
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Great poem. And this is a great question to ask to some one with a secret crush.

Re: Will you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnyzz on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:28:02 PM AEST
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i beleive this is a poem that applies to everybody. To say that this was great would be generic and obvious. Keepn on writing.

Re: Will you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_soul on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:36:45 PM AEST
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I think I may have felt this way... Once, but then they stole my heart away.... Crushed. I hope these questions will come to my mind with another someday.
S.S
P.S Nice write

Re: Will you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 07:46:37 PM AEST
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I like this. A plea from the heart, and a beautiful one.
Take care.
David

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