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Unintentional Box
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:33:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There is a place
Of which, Id been unaware
It has too little space
Many, it does scare
Its effects can be seen
If you look rather closely
There is a bit of sheen
The brow reacts moistly
Breathing becomes erratic
The eyes widen in terror
Here starts the panic
To the chagrin of the scarer
Do you know of the box I speak?
The one of unintention?
The view is bleak
Reminiscent of detention
If the scarer steps back
Maybe itll be found
The space one does lack
As ever, does abound
As real as it appears
The box of mention
Simply disappears
With a change of perception
Choice is still choice
And always will be
For that we rejoice
It means were always free
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2005-08-24 10:33:16]
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Re: Unintentional Box
(User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 07:21:20 AM AEST
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the poem was a tad confusing, but nevertheless I still liked it
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Re: Unintentional Box
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:18:32 PM AEST
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| Open pandora's box... i liked it, a nice rhyme scheme. |
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