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Array ( [sid] => 104309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => last drop falls [time] => 2005-08-24 14:59:42 [hometext] => About a friend who used to cut [bodytext] => your a whore to me now
theres nothing better you can do
the love that used to be
is fake and upsetting
if only you could see
because your the one everyone want
but nobody want to know that
you were with me that special day

you will cut your wrists again
bleed your self dry
until you are close to die
you will cry into the red liquid
until the last drop falls

your crazy to think that i still care
for you to die would make me glad
to see you so depressed, so sad
i hope none og your wishes come true
for those promises you made to me
hah! i hope you slip in this pool you have made
remember this my friend
you were never loved

you will cut your wrists again
bleed your self dry
until you are close to die
you will cry into the red liquid
until the last drop falls

the last drop fell
as you fell to your knees
crashing with a thud
no-one came to rescue you
they just stood and stared
glad that you passed away
to end your crying game

you will never cut your wrists again
to bleed your self dry
until you are close to death
you will never cry into the red liquid
until the last drop falls [comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 48 [informant] => BraveSaint [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
last drop falls

Contributed by BraveSaint on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 02:59:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



your a whore to me now
theres nothing better you can do
the love that used to be
is fake and upsetting
if only you could see
because your the one everyone want
but nobody want to know that
you were with me that special day

you will cut your wrists again
bleed your self dry
until you are close to die
you will cry into the red liquid
until the last drop falls

your crazy to think that i still care
for you to die would make me glad
to see you so depressed, so sad
i hope none og your wishes come true
for those promises you made to me
hah! i hope you slip in this pool you have made
remember this my friend
you were never loved

you will cut your wrists again
bleed your self dry
until you are close to die
you will cry into the red liquid
until the last drop falls

the last drop fell
as you fell to your knees
crashing with a thud
no-one came to rescue you
they just stood and stared
glad that you passed away
to end your crying game

you will never cut your wrists again
to bleed your self dry
until you are close to death
you will never cry into the red liquid
until the last drop falls




Copyright © BraveSaint ... [ 2005-08-24 14:59:42]
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Re: last drop falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:53:14 PM AEST
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Amazing write..so very sad.

Jeff


Re: last drop falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_soul on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:39:03 PM AEST
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Very strong, it seems like you were telling your friend to cut him/herself and if so, why?
S.S
P.S Good friend, glad you care


Re: last drop falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:28:37 PM AEST
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one of my closest friends self harmed, and what got him through it was the support he received from within our friendship group, it's a difficult thing to understand, and as others have noted you seem to be renouncing your friendship, which is a shame.


Re: last drop falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:36:16 PM AEST
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hmm very sad piece here .




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