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Array ( [sid] => 104353 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => An Unworthy Loser [time] => 2005-08-25 01:19:02 [hometext] => This is for the [bodytext] => It’s a race that starts out even
Until the starting gun fires
It’s a race based on cheating
And usually won by liars
The last place guy so trim and fit
Runs every leg as hard as he can
But it’s a medal he will never seem to get.

The race is over powered by men who lie
Men who will do anything just to get by
They will get what they want
Even if in the end it makes her cry

The last place guy is so sweet
Wants to play with her for keeps
He’s the one who tells her she is beautiful
It is her that he would never deceit

But does anyone ever notice last place?
No, their eyes are on the podium
Lying, cheating, and unfaithfulness
Is what they choose to be their fate

So if love is the prize of a foot race
The playas will be standing on the podium
While the nice guy stumbles in last place.
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An Unworthy Loser

Contributed by Beckett0306 on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:19:02 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



It’s a race that starts out even
Until the starting gun fires
It’s a race based on cheating
And usually won by liars
The last place guy so trim and fit
Runs every leg as hard as he can
But it’s a medal he will never seem to get.

The race is over powered by men who lie
Men who will do anything just to get by
They will get what they want
Even if in the end it makes her cry

The last place guy is so sweet
Wants to play with her for keeps
He’s the one who tells her she is beautiful
It is her that he would never deceit

But does anyone ever notice last place?
No, their eyes are on the podium
Lying, cheating, and unfaithfulness
Is what they choose to be their fate

So if love is the prize of a foot race
The playas will be standing on the podium
While the nice guy stumbles in last place.




Copyright © Beckett0306 ... [ 2005-08-25 01:19:02]
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Re: An Unworthy Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:21:00 AM AEST
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This is an awesome poem because you speak the truth.. I shake my head when I see a relationship break down because of unfaithfulness. Thanks


Re: An Unworthy Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:37:01 AM AEST
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great poem...


Re: An Unworthy Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:42:18 AM AEST
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great poem...


Re: An Unworthy Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:34:43 AM AEST
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Wow a very very good poem, I loved it, very true as well, thank you for sharing, keep up the great work. SLipSiX.


Re: An Unworthy Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:11:02 PM AEST
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Thats most of the ppls prob.its like judging ths outside, for what the inner is offering. Good post.

Brew~




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