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Array ( [sid] => 104576 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicidal Thoughts [time] => 2005-08-28 22:08:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => All the thoughts of suicide
All the plans of how to die
Thinking of how to try today,
How to make yourself go away
Wondering if it’s the gun or knife
That’s going to try to take your life
Or maybe today it will be the rope
Taking every breath and every hope

A lot of thinking about suicide
Going through everyone’s mind
Wondering why they are stuck here
Living life alone- their only fear
Dark thoughts passing through
Suicidal thoughts in me and you
Suicidal thoughts in her and him
Doing everything that we can
Just to end our lives today and now
Spend all of our time wondering how
Envisions of the gun, the rope and the knife
Thinking of how today you will end your life

Don’t care about how the others will feel
Don’t know that someone’s heart you will steal
When they see the person that they loved dead,
They’ll be beating themselves over the head
Because you went and put a knife to your throat
And said it was all too much for you to cope
And all your secret admirer can to do is cry
And wonder why it was you went and died
And wonder that maybe if they had told you
About their love for you, that you’d love, too
But they didn’t and they feel to blame
And they want to die on your name

So they pick up the gun and think about you
The thoughts went from me to you and to them, too
Well, what can you do? They’re just thoughts of suicide,
Just someone else thinking of ways in which they can die
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Suicidal Thoughts

Contributed by sprinter27 on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:08:48 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



All the thoughts of suicide
All the plans of how to die
Thinking of how to try today,
How to make yourself go away
Wondering if it’s the gun or knife
That’s going to try to take your life
Or maybe today it will be the rope
Taking every breath and every hope

A lot of thinking about suicide
Going through everyone’s mind
Wondering why they are stuck here
Living life alone- their only fear
Dark thoughts passing through
Suicidal thoughts in me and you
Suicidal thoughts in her and him
Doing everything that we can
Just to end our lives today and now
Spend all of our time wondering how
Envisions of the gun, the rope and the knife
Thinking of how today you will end your life

Don’t care about how the others will feel
Don’t know that someone’s heart you will steal
When they see the person that they loved dead,
They’ll be beating themselves over the head
Because you went and put a knife to your throat
And said it was all too much for you to cope
And all your secret admirer can to do is cry
And wonder why it was you went and died
And wonder that maybe if they had told you
About their love for you, that you’d love, too
But they didn’t and they feel to blame
And they want to die on your name

So they pick up the gun and think about you
The thoughts went from me to you and to them, too
Well, what can you do? They’re just thoughts of suicide,
Just someone else thinking of ways in which they can die




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Re: Suicidal Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:50:38 AM AEST
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Good job with this write, alot of thought put into it...uhhh no pun intended :O
It is true though. As I said before, you just never know who's life you've affected, or will affect. Keep up the good writes sprints!

Scorp.


Re: Suicidal Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:08:49 PM AEST
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Great write!




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