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[title] => Just be
[time] => 2005-08-29 04:05:06
[hometext] => Just a few thoughts on some the words spoken to me
[bodytext] => I ask you what you need
The premise, you and me
Your answer; “To Just Be”
I ponder your message
Understanding escapes
Questions of the meaning
Remain a mystery
Listen without bias
An open mind and heart
Push aside suspicion
Forget unspoken lies
My bleeding heart mending
With every passing day
Each softly spoken word
Soft tender loving touch
Answering the query
I’ve pondered for so long
Giving me renewed strength
Allowing us “To Just Be”
Shannon
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Just be
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LoveStruck_Hippie
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 04:05:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I ask you what you need
The premise, you and me
Your answer; “To Just Be”
I ponder your message
Understanding escapes
Questions of the meaning
Remain a mystery
Listen without bias
An open mind and heart
Push aside suspicion
Forget unspoken lies
My bleeding heart mending
With every passing day
Each softly spoken word
Soft tender loving touch
Answering the query
I’ve pondered for so long
Giving me renewed strength
Allowing us “To Just Be”
Shannon
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2005-08-29 04:05:06]
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Re: Just be
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 04:14:17 AM AEST
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Great writing.
I don't know how old or young u r but u have much wisdom.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Just be
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by Spike on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:07:32 AM AEST
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Nazmythian is either a lucky bugger or he has a stalker on his tail - I prefer to hold the first happy thought.
Shannon,
A mystical, sweet, instrospective, uplifting and thoughtful poem. very romantic, very Zen.
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Re: Just be
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:12:53 AM AEST
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I love a nice, renewed hope poem! How lovely. All the best to you both! Good job on this write.
Scorp. |
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Re: Just be
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by anitajames on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:23:09 PM AEST
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| You said it all. Love does not have to be complicated and neither does life. Sometimes it is wonderful"to just be". |
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Re: Just be
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:10:33 PM AEST
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This is really great, Shannon. I love those words. I wish life could be as simple as that all the time. But relationships can be if we let them. To just accept love and each other and “To Just Be”. What more does one truly need in life?
Hugs,
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Re: Just be
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 07:31:26 PM AEST
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We have many, many obligations in life, some desirable, some useful, some we do in order to find some type of relief. Most need no argument resolved, and most we take for granted.
We quietly think soberly and weigh out each event as our day goes along. Some of us cannot bear to feel reality, so we tend to avoid certain noticeable occurrences as they do come.
Sometimes our lives can be puzzles or riddles, sometimes there is doubt and uneasiness. But there is always hope. Down deep inside of our souls, lies intellect, love, compassion, tender affections and courage.
With those tools of knowledge, we can expand our growth and repair our hearts, so that if any question does come along we can always dig deep down inside of our souls and get the answer, and then....
*****“To Just Be”
Beautiful write, thank you,
Raquel Lea |
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Re: Just be
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by Willofree on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 07:45:37 PM AEST
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Very impressive write which seems to focus on the most mature love and commitment. The essence seems to emphasize that true love must not be possessive, but willing for each to be their own person. Communicating and listening so important....
Well done, Shannon
Will |
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Re: Just be
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 07:41:15 PM AEST
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Very proufound message, which depicts a lot or wisdom. A succinct poem that speaks volumes with regards to a relationship. Creative style as well.
Well done, Shannon
Will |
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Re: Just be
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by Karazoul on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 07:24:01 PM AEST
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| a very lovely love poem nice feeling it portrays |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 10:52:13 AM AEST
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wow, can't get no plainer than that straight from the heart love your tittle love your poem love your style . . .
((((Shannon)))))
Ben |
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 06:05:41 PM AEST
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Shannon I dont know how I missed ur write, but this is an outstanding and brilliantly penned write. Filled with so much wisdom.
Hats off to u. Keep up the brilliant work.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 06:59:44 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Just be
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by Kamal on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:31:52 AM AEST
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I hear you ma keep up that knowledge..
Its wonderful..
Nuff Respect...Sinnnn...
Peace & Love |
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:09:58 PM AEST
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| You've got a new fan Shannon, my hippie sister. Wonderful write. I like your style...very open and honest. Peace to you, Laura |
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 08:07:09 PM AEST
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this was beautifully done...perfect choice of words.
wiz |
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:30:27 PM AEST
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| I love how you write. There is just a flow that makes your words weave through my mind, creating a wonderful story. I love this poem!!! |
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