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Array ( [sid] => 104637 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Until then... [time] => 2005-08-29 20:12:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm sorry grandpa that I didn't come today
But now I will say what I need to say
I just didn't think I could come because of everything that was going on
But that was no excuse, you really are gone
I thought that if I went people would stare at me
But that shouldn't have mattered it was you I was there to see
I know that I should have come
And that now you are in a much better home
I will be able to see you again
But for now it's good-bye and I miss you
Until then......
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Until then...

Contributed by undiscoveredshadow on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:12:24 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I'm sorry grandpa that I didn't come today
But now I will say what I need to say
I just didn't think I could come because of everything that was going on
But that was no excuse, you really are gone
I thought that if I went people would stare at me
But that shouldn't have mattered it was you I was there to see
I know that I should have come
And that now you are in a much better home
I will be able to see you again
But for now it's good-bye and I miss you
Until then......

Copyright © undiscoveredshadow ... [ 2005-08-29 20:12:24]
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Re: Until then... (User Rating: 1 )
by rubytears on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:19:29 PM AEST
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exacatky how i felt with the death of my great grandma
i did nt ike the other ppl at her home they scared me
and when i did visit it was too late and she died

Re: Until then... (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:33:08 PM AEST
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the feeling here is strong and i know it well, my grandfather passed away last month and the whole time he was sick i didnt know what to do or say until it was too late

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