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Of this sweet tempest
Render me your chosen Queen
I’ll become your Ice Maiden tonight
Hardened heart towards thee does lean

Rain shatters
Transparent droplets
That enfolds your malice face
Those evil, angry eyes of white
That viciously pierces through my body’s place

Passionate terror
Soaked in watery doom
All morsel of horror does saturate
Abruptly altering this beheld rainstorm
Eternal shadows beneath my pores permeate

Ah! Fulfill me
Open up your dark soul
And let me greatly partake
Of your eloquent bleak existence
Your spirit void of purity, for my own sake

Let’s bleed together

Succumb together

Die together

In this sinless state of rain
Of which we can never attain

Purely, seductively
Despoil my soul in this darksome shower

Passionately, ravish me
Each other let’s mightily devour

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Showering in Wickedness

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:43:52 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dark Lord,
Of this sweet tempest
Render me your chosen Queen
I’ll become your Ice Maiden tonight
Hardened heart towards thee does lean

Rain shatters
Transparent droplets
That enfolds your malice face
Those evil, angry eyes of white
That viciously pierces through my body’s place

Passionate terror
Soaked in watery doom
All morsel of horror does saturate
Abruptly altering this beheld rainstorm
Eternal shadows beneath my pores permeate

Ah! Fulfill me
Open up your dark soul
And let me greatly partake
Of your eloquent bleak existence
Your spirit void of purity, for my own sake

Let’s bleed together

Succumb together

Die together

In this sinless state of rain
Of which we can never attain

Purely, seductively
Despoil my soul in this darksome shower

Passionately, ravish me
Each other let’s mightily devour

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-08-30 21:43:52]
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Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:02:19 PM AEST
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Wow! This is WICKED GOOD! (haha)
This poem is so COOL!
For some reason, it reminds me of the Dark Side of the Force in Star Wars...
Ah, don't listen to me, I'm a nut!
Anyroad, WONDEFUL JOB, pUnKa_RaCh.

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by Kano on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:13:23 PM AEST
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Cool, very imaginery I like it

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:16:38 PM AEST
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Yes, my thoughts exactly. Saw Darth Vader. I just viewed Star Wars 3 the other night, so it is still fresh in my mind, the Dark Side.

Magnificent write.. very creative.

One sided and that is great. Keep the dark with the dark so to speak.

Perhaps after all evil is devoured, light may shine through.

Raquel Leah :D

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:41:47 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. I very much enjoyed it

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:21:22 AM AEST
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Have to agree with everyone else.
About this being amazingly awesome.not stars wars thing.I not a fan.
this is a great write.
hope to see more of it.
~bb~

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 01:06:30 AM AEST
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Great write, as always. :-)

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:46:42 AM AEST
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Ohh i like this. It's dark and spine chilling.

Thanks for sharing this, and great writing as always.

Jane~

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:07:53 PM AEST
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You epress your emotions so well in this peice, i was captivated as though in in a spell
this is magnificent beyond any a masterpeice
whew! my heart is still reeling . . .

Ben

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 07:56:46 PM AEST
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It's amazing Rach-
..brilliant infact..
the imagery is beyond masterful..
and the subtle way of rhyme
makes it even more enjoyable
to read..(if at all possible that is)

deep and dark..
and so well written..

Yours-

B

Re: Showering in Wickedness (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:21:03 AM AEST
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Your words are very convincing. It is hard not to return evil for the evil done to us but it is possible.

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