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Array ( [sid] => 10485 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Clean and Pure [time] => 2003-01-15 02:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hey its me.
Well it's been almost a year and all's the same.
I can't believe I made it this far and without you here.
What I miss most is the stuff that didn't matter,
oooh how I loved thee where are you now?
It must be nice to be happy somewhere else.
Crazy minds;
though not yours how you wish it was, but mine.
Learning roads are easy, the paths are more difficult.
I wonder what path I'll take.
Hopefully it will lead to your door.
When it opens;
your soul that wasn't there before.
Appears clean and pure

Katherine L Chaffee

Copyright ©2003 Katherine L Chaffee [comments] => 5 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mckayla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => euskara [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Clean and Pure

Contributed by mckayla on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Hey its me.
Well it's been almost a year and all's the same.
I can't believe I made it this far and without you here.
What I miss most is the stuff that didn't matter,
oooh how I loved thee where are you now?
It must be nice to be happy somewhere else.
Crazy minds;
though not yours how you wish it was, but mine.
Learning roads are easy, the paths are more difficult.
I wonder what path I'll take.
Hopefully it will lead to your door.
When it opens;
your soul that wasn't there before.
Appears clean and pure

Katherine L Chaffee

Copyright ©2003 Katherine L Chaffee

Copyright Â© mckayla ... [ 2003-01-15 02:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Clean and Pure (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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I really like the lines: " oooh how I loved thee where are you now?
It must be nice to be happy somewhere else.
Crazy minds; "
I think the only way possible for a person to make his/her soul "Clean and Pure" is for that person to ask forgiveness of God for their sins - seeking redemption though the finished work of Jesus Christ on the cross.
Regards,
Ramfire

Re: Clean and Pure (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:49:40 PM AEST
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A yearning for that which is lost to us.

A good read,
wordsy

Re: Clean and Pure (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 07:39:21 PM AEST
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Hey you're very good,
have to say I had to read this one thrice,(it's late here, my brain!?!)
I can relate to this very well, except for me it's been longer than a year!:-(
Great write

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Clean and Pure (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:03:23 PM AEST
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a very bittersweet mood to this poem...but very well said...why don't you have more up? you write so well...
:-)

Re: Clean and Pure (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:14:07 PM AEST
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ooh I commented on the repost of this, I love the old version2 *breathes in the dust*

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