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Array ( [sid] => 104850 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Monotony [time] => 2005-09-01 15:26:50 [hometext] => The rhyme scheme is simple, the meaning is clear, and it might seem a little boring, but it's one of my favourite poems that I've written. [bodytext] => It seems that I’m starting to fall again
Beneath the excitement now and then
A shadow, a hail of wearisome feelings
This pain, it hits me and I’m reeling

Nothing to do, this atmosphere is tainted
The scene is lost, the heaven I painted
Sweet summer’s taste, stale on my lips
Everything else, cold on my fingertips

The clock is sporting many hands
The seconds drags, as if it never lands
Looking for my cure in all of the wrong places
Searching for a certain light in hundreds of faces

All it takes is a minute with you
And all of the world can continue to do
What it does everyday, what it does to the time
We’ll watch the clouds shift. It’ll be sublime

It’s been 2 hours, but I know that can’t be true
Because all of this time I’ve been walking with you
Why has the time gone so suddenly fast?
Why is it that moments like this cannot last?

So today is finally ending and tomorrow will come soon
More tedious moments, morning, night and noon
I only wish that time would stop and that you would stay
Because tomorrow will bring another monotonous day [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Allofyourtears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Monotony

Contributed by Allofyourtears on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 03:26:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



It seems that I’m starting to fall again
Beneath the excitement now and then
A shadow, a hail of wearisome feelings
This pain, it hits me and I’m reeling

Nothing to do, this atmosphere is tainted
The scene is lost, the heaven I painted
Sweet summer’s taste, stale on my lips
Everything else, cold on my fingertips

The clock is sporting many hands
The seconds drags, as if it never lands
Looking for my cure in all of the wrong places
Searching for a certain light in hundreds of faces

All it takes is a minute with you
And all of the world can continue to do
What it does everyday, what it does to the time
We’ll watch the clouds shift. It’ll be sublime

It’s been 2 hours, but I know that can’t be true
Because all of this time I’ve been walking with you
Why has the time gone so suddenly fast?
Why is it that moments like this cannot last?

So today is finally ending and tomorrow will come soon
More tedious moments, morning, night and noon
I only wish that time would stop and that you would stay
Because tomorrow will bring another monotonous day




Copyright © Allofyourtears ... [ 2005-09-01 15:26:50]
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Re: Monotony (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 03:59:30 PM AEST
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This is good. I don't think it is boring at all.


Re: Monotony (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:38:38 PM AEST
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Not boring in the least......a beautiful write!!!!

Great rhyming style and heart warming and (sometimes sad) content....but a total success!!

And I can relate to your feelings...(time is non-existent when you are with the one you love)

Thanks for sharing, this poem makes me smile ;)




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