Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	10-June 01:27:19 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 104881 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Right After The Other [time] => 2005-09-01 23:51:01 [hometext] => And this is why I just wish guys would learn that just as women think men are evil, men should think the same of most women... sorry girls you know I love being female, but we can be so cruel at times... [bodytext] => One right after the other
They set themselves up for heartache
Walking upon broken glass
To be sent back with more pain than they can take

One right after the other
They line up for the fall
To ask a daring question
Only to be sent home barely able to crawl

One right after the other
They take a fast, steep dive
Off the ledge that they built up
Only to feel like they're barely alive

One right after the other
They lay their hearts on the line
Wishing, hoping, praying
That they'll recieve something divine

One right after the other
I have to tell them no
It's a fact I'll always hate
But I'm afraid it must be so

Because one right after the other
Every guy before
Made up a new torture
To hurt me a little more [comments] => 9 [counter] => 450 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

One Right After The Other

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:51:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

One right after the other
They set themselves up for heartache
Walking upon broken glass
To be sent back with more pain than they can take

One right after the other
They line up for the fall
To ask a daring question
Only to be sent home barely able to crawl

One right after the other
They take a fast, steep dive
Off the ledge that they built up
Only to feel like they're barely alive

One right after the other
They lay their hearts on the line
Wishing, hoping, praying
That they'll recieve something divine

One right after the other
I have to tell them no
It's a fact I'll always hate
But I'm afraid it must be so

Because one right after the other
Every guy before
Made up a new torture
To hurt me a little more

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-09-01 23:51:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:25:09 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

((((((((((((Kie-Kie))))))))))) such wisdom and such hurt and so deserving of love and so shall u receive it in time my friend in time till
then protect that heart of yours, your well on your way and don't even know yet, but he will
and one day amidst all the evil, you shall be
triumphant over love. . .

((((((((((((Kie-Kie)))))))))))))))

Ben

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:39:14 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

yup, women are evil

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 03:18:36 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

You hit this nail on the head.

This is why I stand on the sidelines and spend my time observing; one of its better uses.

Nicely done!

Andrew
(grinnin' at Orph's proclamation)

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 07:19:34 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Yup this is true. We could be evil if we wanted to. Were not saying we do it all the time but we do get bad sometimes LOL.

A lovely honest write Kielapoo. It's good to see your poems again.

Hugs,
Jane~

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 10:17:35 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I'm sure some people will really relate to this. I certianly can. Just as there are good, there are bad also. Nice flowing write. Chris.

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 01:28:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

hi gurl,

well i dint know where to begin I only know that I'm going to print this off one day and have it in mi book of favorite poem's once i get that going. I'm being slow on that lol I agree we can be mean (well some females) so yea I happen to know a few *rolls eyes* k well I'm going to go u take care sweetie n i'll try to catch up on ur poems' some more. -huggles- be safe stay beautiful.

much love n poet respect
Care

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:22:06 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wonderful honest write

Love Angelxxx

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 07:44:27 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

So much truth behind ur words. An outstanding and brilliant write.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer

Re: One Right After The Other (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:30:06 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

excellent poem...jh

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com