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Array ( [sid] => 105110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just here to say [time] => 2005-09-05 17:40:17 [hometext] => i wrote this for a girl, shes amaze. end of. [bodytext] => Im biting my lip
Im trying to say, I’ll stay
I’ll never run away
I love you, too much
To see you like that

these things they make me cry,
make me weep,
at least i can weep,
and never will i die,

not as long as i can cry,
these scars,
this fluid treat ,
this tightning noose,
im feeling loose,
maybe ill hang low for a while,
30-40 seconds should do it,

end it now,
swing to the ground
saying goodbye is easy when you try,

all this, they were my thoughts,
until the day that i met you,

now i fail to see
those ropes,
that blade,
that high up bridge.

opened my eyes
ill show you my sky,
open up my world,
if you care to try

i sit here,
pencil in hand
writting for you,
spelling for you,
making mistakes for you,

its got to be perfect
my erasers wearing down,
Ill take the wheel
50 miles per hour towards the wall,

but wait
whose that in my mind
she tripping its comming from my heart
handbrake on
skid to stop

your walkling closer
my eyes light up
i open my arms
you just walked past.

dont let it be like that
i want you and me
to stay as 1
hand in hand
i wont turn away
will you?

last time to wrie
my pencils wearing thin
just one more thing
to note down on heart stained slate
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just here to say

Contributed by rejected-poet on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 05:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Im biting my lip
Im trying to say, I’ll stay
I’ll never run away
I love you, too much
To see you like that

these things they make me cry,
make me weep,
at least i can weep,
and never will i die,

not as long as i can cry,
these scars,
this fluid treat ,
this tightning noose,
im feeling loose,
maybe ill hang low for a while,
30-40 seconds should do it,

end it now,
swing to the ground
saying goodbye is easy when you try,

all this, they were my thoughts,
until the day that i met you,

now i fail to see
those ropes,
that blade,
that high up bridge.

opened my eyes
ill show you my sky,
open up my world,
if you care to try

i sit here,
pencil in hand
writting for you,
spelling for you,
making mistakes for you,

its got to be perfect
my erasers wearing down,
Ill take the wheel
50 miles per hour towards the wall,

but wait
whose that in my mind
she tripping its comming from my heart
handbrake on
skid to stop

your walkling closer
my eyes light up
i open my arms
you just walked past.

dont let it be like that
i want you and me
to stay as 1
hand in hand
i wont turn away
will you?

last time to wrie
my pencils wearing thin
just one more thing
to note down on heart stained slate

Copyright Â© rejected-poet ... [ 2005-09-05 17:40:17]
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Re: just here to say (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:10:20 PM AEST
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Amazing write, its good you've found that one, I'm sure when the times write she'll show her effection for you. The poems very relatable, I guess everyone has that one person, that can make them feel safe again, make them feel happy, restrain them from thoughts of self inflicted pain, exremely good job, I could feel the love you have, keep it up, I can't wait to see more.

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