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Array ( [sid] => 105127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sailing, to a new Adventure [time] => 2005-09-05 21:17:51 [hometext] => leaving the past and bringing a new beginning [bodytext] => The cascading lull over the deep dark ocean
The seas, so clam,waves not hitting any jettys
The boat is now on the horizon
Many await, to board the crowded liner
A silence has brought a un easy thought in mind
To board, this ship with no one on arm
Is breath taking, and meaningless
Standing now on the edge of the bow
Wind taking all the bottled up and intense feelings
Carrying them to the night and dumping them freely
The stars shine with the brightest lights
The fullness of the moon gives a glitter of hint
The spray of the salty ocean takes the intense
Sailing the sea, and bringing in new journeys of life
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Sailing, to a new Adventure

Contributed by brew on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:17:51 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The cascading lull over the deep dark ocean
The seas, so clam,waves not hitting any jettys
The boat is now on the horizon
Many await, to board the crowded liner
A silence has brought a un easy thought in mind
To board, this ship with no one on arm
Is breath taking, and meaningless
Standing now on the edge of the bow
Wind taking all the bottled up and intense feelings
Carrying them to the night and dumping them freely
The stars shine with the brightest lights
The fullness of the moon gives a glitter of hint
The spray of the salty ocean takes the intense
Sailing the sea, and bringing in new journeys of life

Copyright © brew ... [ 2005-09-05 21:17:51]
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Re: Sailing, to a new Adventure (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:21:46 PM AEST
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now this i gotta say this poem moved me from the inside of my of heart outward, what a strong and intence feeling this gave me and i'm your garden variety pessamist, a beautiful peice of writtng truly magnificent 2 say the least not mention i from RI the ocean state is it any wonder i found favor with presentation of this peice?nicely done. . .

Ben

Re: Sailing, to a new Adventure (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 04:27:02 AM AEST
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Nicely done, indeed. I like this sort of expression, just a little abstraction, and communication through a coherent string of images instead of conventional platitudes. It's refreshing. Do keep it up.

Andrew

Re: Sailing, to a new Adventure (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 07:22:44 AM AEST
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new beginings, the exitement and anxiety of a new journey. What a great representation of emotions that go with this.
A wonderfully vivd and emotive piece!!!!!

Re: Sailing, to a new Adventure (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 12:55:18 PM AEST
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Another excellent write Brew.
Enjoyable read, as always.

Jeff

Re: Sailing, to a new Adventure (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 09:15:24 PM AEST
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Ahhh yes! I love this...I love being out in the water period, but the ocean...even better! With the stars beaming down...yep!
That would carry off my pent up emotions too : )
Wonderful imagery in this write, sure wish I could be there!!

Scorp.

Re: Sailing, to a new Adventure (User Rating: 1 )
by ArsenicMyst on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:05:41 PM AEST
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hi there brew .... thankyou for your kind greetings ...

now then, i do love this ...
a little piece with such immense depth ...
foreboding and yet resilient,
evoking the unknown

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