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Array ( [sid] => 105306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tears [time] => 2005-09-08 15:08:23 [hometext] => Just another poem that came to me very quickly [bodytext] => just driving to work
like any other day
tears roll down my cheek
why i can't say

life may not be great
that much i do know
but with no catalyst
why do these tears flow

moving on with life
i dismiss this event
but a couple days later
lacrimal glands will vent

to those that are sane
they don't understand
that losing control
wasn't what was planned

philosphically i wonder
what sanity must be
although i can say
it hasn't visited me

my blood is too sweet
it's something i ate
last year i was 90
but now 328

an emotional cripple
having lived too many years
the causes are many
for the river of tears [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 21 [informant] => jaycee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Tears

Contributed by jaycee on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:08:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

just driving to work
like any other day
tears roll down my cheek
why i can't say

life may not be great
that much i do know
but with no catalyst
why do these tears flow

moving on with life
i dismiss this event
but a couple days later
lacrimal glands will vent

to those that are sane
they don't understand
that losing control
wasn't what was planned

philosphically i wonder
what sanity must be
although i can say
it hasn't visited me

my blood is too sweet
it's something i ate
last year i was 90
but now 328

an emotional cripple
having lived too many years
the causes are many
for the river of tears

Copyright © jaycee ... [ 2005-09-08 15:08:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:17:43 PM AEST
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I am sorry but I didn't understand what this poem is about. Some rhymes are visibly forced.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:34:40 PM AEST
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Jaycee
I am sorry to hear you have diabetes, a serious disease . The good news is its treatable. Hang in there, and take care of your self, (sugar free brownies)
Hugs
Kara

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 06:27:56 PM AEST
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(((hugs)))
Jenni

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