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Array ( [sid] => 105423 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Steaven. <33 [time] => 2005-09-10 15:44:45 [hometext] => Do you believe in pain? [bodytext] => Can anybody hear me?
Im falling, someone catch me.
He wont be here to save me
because he's lost.
We had something special
something that was so real
but now it's gone.
I dont know where i left it.
I dont know where we kept it
but now im lost.
He gave me all this time
And he swore that he was mine..
How did i get left behind in all this?
I still try to drag this on
It's just we've been together for so long...
and im not strong enough to face this.
Last night is when he told me
Last night's the first time he upset me.
And i cried.
I went into my bathroom...
I knew there was nothing i could do..
I cut and i cut and i cried.
You don't know it but i love you.
And...it didnt even hurt
i couldnt even feel the pain
i only saw the blood of the remains.
But this time i just want you to dissappear,
and i'll try to forget that you were ever here
This isn't something simple...
You know it hurts.
I try to pretend that i really dont care
and ill move on..but your always gunna be there.
in my mind, in my thoughts, in my dreams..
Ill never be able to escape you.
You were my last regret.
I'll never forget you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 20 [informant] => Lollypopxcore [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )
Steaven. <33

Contributed by Lollypopxcore on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:44:45 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove



Can anybody hear me?
Im falling, someone catch me.
He wont be here to save me
because he's lost.
We had something special
something that was so real
but now it's gone.
I dont know where i left it.
I dont know where we kept it
but now im lost.
He gave me all this time
And he swore that he was mine..
How did i get left behind in all this?
I still try to drag this on
It's just we've been together for so long...
and im not strong enough to face this.
Last night is when he told me
Last night's the first time he upset me.
And i cried.
I went into my bathroom...
I knew there was nothing i could do..
I cut and i cut and i cried.
You don't know it but i love you.
And...it didnt even hurt
i couldnt even feel the pain
i only saw the blood of the remains.
But this time i just want you to dissappear,
and i'll try to forget that you were ever here
This isn't something simple...
You know it hurts.
I try to pretend that i really dont care
and ill move on..but your always gunna be there.
in my mind, in my thoughts, in my dreams..
Ill never be able to escape you.
You were my last regret.
I'll never forget you.




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Re: Steaven. <33 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 04:58:43 PM AEST
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its always hard to forget some one we really love no matter how we try to avoid them...great poem keep it up


Re: Steaven. <33 (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos_01 on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 05:28:36 PM AEST
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LOVE,ROUGH YET SO FAIR! (shakespear)
Love huh i am in love yet if we broke up i would break but i know it is hard be there is no one worth ur tears and worth ur blood if someone made u cry and made u bleed wat are they really?

emma


Re: Steaven. <33 (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 06:59:50 PM AEST
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I believe in pain, just not self-inflicted pain. No one is worth that or your life. Someone hurts you, so you go and hurt yourself? That doesn't even make sense, think about it. I am sorry you are hurting but you are making the hurt even worse. It is like being a martyr to make it last longer.

Rita


Re: Steaven. <33 (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:10:21 AM AEST
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I think that love must be cried over before you can truly know its value. Pain and love come hand in hand, and to truly know love, you must come face to face with pain. If your love survives that, then it can survive anything.
Enough of my 2 am wisdom. Sorry.
Take care.
David




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