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as the sun light slowly fades...
as something sweet
slips
into my mind
I close my eyes and sway
here comes that feeling again
The rapture riders are coming for me.

Consumed by the fires of heaven
I smile cause I believe
that love is gonna find a way
to kill the pain,
A genesis of desire
has my soul on fire
this feeling of bliss
takes me highier and higher...

I explode and become a river of tears
rolling serenely down a mountain
flowing into a lake,
A ripple turns into a wave
the reflection of the moon is so beautiful
as a gentle breeze takes me away.

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Rapture Ryder

Contributed by secretwind on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 02:12:16 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The wind blows fallen leaves
as the sun light slowly fades...
as something sweet
slips
into my mind
I close my eyes and sway
here comes that feeling again
The rapture riders are coming for me.

Consumed by the fires of heaven
I smile cause I believe
that love is gonna find a way
to kill the pain,
A genesis of desire
has my soul on fire
this feeling of bliss
takes me highier and higher...

I explode and become a river of tears
rolling serenely down a mountain
flowing into a lake,
A ripple turns into a wave
the reflection of the moon is so beautiful
as a gentle breeze takes me away.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2005-09-12 02:12:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rapture Ryder (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 02:27:31 AM AEST
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Sweet but a bit sad.
Awesome writing my friend.
huggs,
emy

Re: Rapture Ryder (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:59:03 AM AEST
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I don't think the poem quite fits what you have written about in your poem. In fact quite the opposite happens what should be a happy moment turns into a sad one.

Re: Rapture Ryder (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:59:50 PM AEST
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truely beautiful, lovely to read:)

hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Rapture Ryder (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 01:28:09 AM AEST
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Wow,
This just really took me away from things and into your mind and the imagery i go from the last verse was wonderful!!! I really loved the last verse

Leia36

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