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Array ( [sid] => 105660 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I love to bleed [time] => 2005-09-14 01:51:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Use this razor for my demise
see past the bloodstains in my eyes
wipe off the tears
and take a breath
this night, the night
i wait for death
As i feel it dance
it does no harm
As i smooth the blood across my arm
it feels so good
and looks like art
as i cause the pain to stop my heart
It's over now
I cut so deep
this pain, this pleasure
I love to bleed. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Lollypopxcore [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I love to bleed

Contributed by Lollypopxcore on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 01:51:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Use this razor for my demise
see past the bloodstains in my eyes
wipe off the tears
and take a breath
this night, the night
i wait for death
As i feel it dance
it does no harm
As i smooth the blood across my arm
it feels so good
and looks like art
as i cause the pain to stop my heart
It's over now
I cut so deep
this pain, this pleasure
I love to bleed.

Copyright © Lollypopxcore ... [ 2005-09-14 01:51:07]
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Re: I love to bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 03:05:35 AM AEST
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I really love the poetical flow of it...it's excellently written!!!
Slitting is addictive.I hope you'll be able to get over it soon.
good luck
-glass

Re: I love to bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:57:16 AM AEST
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Very sad this one

Colin

Re: I love to bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:12:40 AM AEST
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this flows awesome

Re: I love to bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:23:30 AM AEST
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This, I think, is your best written one so far. It flows, never stoping, until the end. It's sad though, and interesting. But don't enjoy the pain to much. Don't let it rule your heart.
Take care, I look forward to reading more of yours.
David

Re: I love to bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Rogue on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:27:23 PM AEST
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I really do this poem. It's a work of art and really capturms the way u feel and the way others may be feeling as well.
Keep up the good work, and feel better.
I know how u feel.

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