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You never really listen, although I tell you so
You talk to me with empty words, a voice that makes no sense
It's not that you don't feel it,you are deep and so intense

You not the one to voice your fears, you keep it all inside
But such a difference I could make, if you could fight your pride
Your mind is closed, an iron door, your private prison cell
A place of deep depression, your own deep private hell

I missyou, how I miss you, my arms are open wide
Step outside your empty space,come on , walk by my side
Fling the floodgates open, let all your anger free
Then with all the anger gone, there may be room for me [comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 48 [informant] => gwenevere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Missing You

Contributed by gwenevere on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 06:38:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I miss you, how I miss you, but you will never know
You never really listen, although I tell you so
You talk to me with empty words, a voice that makes no sense
It's not that you don't feel it,you are deep and so intense

You not the one to voice your fears, you keep it all inside
But such a difference I could make, if you could fight your pride
Your mind is closed, an iron door, your private prison cell
A place of deep depression, your own deep private hell

I missyou, how I miss you, my arms are open wide
Step outside your empty space,come on , walk by my side
Fling the floodgates open, let all your anger free
Then with all the anger gone, there may be room for me

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-09-14 18:38:12]
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Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 07:05:52 PM AEST
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i no exactly what u are trying to say here, except i was the one with depression and felt like i couldnt open up to anybody...but all i need was someone there that cared...even tho they might show it, i always needed some one to tell me that they cared and that i could talk to them about anything...maybe thats what you need to say to your friend...great poem keep it up

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:39:03 PM AEST
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Great poem. Reminds me of myself.

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 10:14:35 PM AEST
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Wishes......how they are could come true, and blend with the heart.............Simple.................yet so complex,.its always that, Yes, if I caould wave the magic wand, and say waaaaaaaaa laaaaaaaa..........Oh it would do. Good luck, and it will happen,,have faith......things happen for reasons.

BreW~

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:37:30 PM AEST
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very powerful write.. its hard to try to get someone to open up when they hide feelings or are full of anger sometimes they are not able to be helped out of it.. but awesome write

JENNI

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 02:02:03 PM AEST
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What a sad and yet most curious poem, never the less the emotins r ever apparent on
and in between the lines, i can relate 2 this well, been there myself, in any case a most
dilligent write in every way shape and form.

Ben

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