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[sid] => 105714
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[aid] => mick
[title] => This Sin Committed
[time] => 2005-09-14 20:52:19
[hometext] => I think that you'll be able to see that I'm dealing with a situation and this is all I could think to do right now. I hope it works.
[bodytext] => No matter what I say or do
It doesn't seem to matter.
You've built up walls of Pain and Pride
No weapon known can shatter.
I never meant to cause you pain
I never wished to steal
That which gave you any joy,
that which made you feel.
Now I sit confused and shunned
Can this ever mend?
This Sin committed was so small
And now it seems the end.
I was no threat and still am not,
Of this I wish you'd see.
For all this anger, all this grief,
It does not need to be.
Come back, my friend, with open arms
Know you're loved and well.
For life without you breaks my heart
This truth I had to tell.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 338
[topic] => 50
[informant] => Loende
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => ApologyPoetry
)
This Sin Committed
Contributed by
Loende
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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No matter what I say or do
It doesn't seem to matter.
You've built up walls of Pain and Pride
No weapon known can shatter.
I never meant to cause you pain
I never wished to steal
That which gave you any joy,
that which made you feel.
Now I sit confused and shunned
Can this ever mend?
This Sin committed was so small
And now it seems the end.
I was no threat and still am not,
Of this I wish you'd see.
For all this anger, all this grief,
It does not need to be.
Come back, my friend, with open arms
Know you're loved and well.
For life without you breaks my heart
This truth I had to tell.
Copyright ©
Loende
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2005-09-14 20:52:19]
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by anitajames on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:04:45 PM AEST
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| Heartbreaking. I hope that you find forgiveness. |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:09:21 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
May the forces be with u.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by brew on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:34:09 PM AEST
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I hope they come back,..........It hurts..........and badly.....You give and they give and one screws up......sometimes its bad, and sometime.not. I think it Always tkes 2..........you cant do with that. So maybe, it will be resovled. Good post.......
Brew~ |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by hoist1atca on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:29:54 PM AEST
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Nice poem-
Friendship as well as love can cast shadows upon the heart and cause the soul to cry-
I hope things work out for you as I have
(been there and done that)
and it weighs heavy on my heart always...
Joe |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:35:33 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful apologetic type poem.. It is sad when we lose a friend due to something careless or hurtful. if its a true poem i hope you guys can over come this and be better friends awesome write
JENNI |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 10:24:25 PM AEST
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Hopefully they will realize it was either a misunderstanding, or not that big a deal..
In any event..I hope you work it out..
Great write-
B |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:10:27 AM AEST
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A lot of heart in this, methinks. The struggling reason and pained humility, will I hope very muchly be rewarded with reconciliation.
Blessings, mo chara.
Anndra |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by remote on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 04:12:16 AM AEST
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| Nice, honest apology, loved it. |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by jheng on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 04:49:35 PM AEST
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| i wish you've been forgiven, i am in the same situation too, asking for the forgiveness of a friend, he's been avoiding me recently, and i do want the friendship be saved. |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:05:04 PM AEST
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Mayhaps she'll come back. It seems like it's beggining to happen.
Take care.
David |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by prettyboygraham on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 05:46:45 PM AEST
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| My opinion of this poem is good. It is worded so well and is a masterpiece. Keep writin |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:57:40 AM AEST
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| yes, forgiveness is never easy. a powerful poem once again. |
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Re: This Sin Committed
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by elle on
Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:25:13 PM AEST
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a glimspe into the healing process of human relationship. . .
surely, forgiveness is a blessing we should all share. . .
thanks for sharing your soul. peace elle |
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