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Array ( [sid] => 105779 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Distance [time] => 2005-09-15 20:13:28 [hometext] => I hate the distance between me and her. I want to close this distance [bodytext] => ------------__________------------------


The Distance

It's not the way I see me
It's the way I let you down
I can't believe that it hurts this much

When I can't hear your voice
I'm calling out to you
Though I know you can't hear me

So please don't leave
Please let's close the gap in this distance
I hope you can see
I can never be without you.

It's the way I leave me
I'ts the way I drag myself down
I didn't think it would hurt this much
To not hear your sound

So please don't leave this distance
Let's close the gap in our existence
I hope you can see

You're an echo I hear in my ears
I see you in my mind
You're a constant burning
That burns within the best of me

I know what I have been searching for
I feel it inside
You are my light
Don't take it away, it's the only thing keeping me alive.

I want to see you
I want you to see me
Stay one step closer
Please don't leave me Please let's close this distance! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => Spell Check Beforehand Please. Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
The Distance

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 08:13:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



------------__________------------------


The Distance

It's not the way I see me
It's the way I let you down
I can't believe that it hurts this much

When I can't hear your voice
I'm calling out to you
Though I know you can't hear me

So please don't leave
Please let's close the gap in this distance
I hope you can see
I can never be without you.

It's the way I leave me
I'ts the way I drag myself down
I didn't think it would hurt this much
To not hear your sound

So please don't leave this distance
Let's close the gap in our existence
I hope you can see

You're an echo I hear in my ears
I see you in my mind
You're a constant burning
That burns within the best of me

I know what I have been searching for
I feel it inside
You are my light
Don't take it away, it's the only thing keeping me alive.

I want to see you
I want you to see me
Stay one step closer
Please don't leave me Please let's close this distance!




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-09-15 20:13:28]
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Re: The Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 08:35:58 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing. I hope you will close the gap...
Best wishes,
Alex


Re: The Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:48:28 PM AEST
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Distance sucks, ....yet if it is RIGHT, you can make it close.! Do not give in, fight..........you know that it is right.! Ppl can meet, where they choose...........just some are scared it wont keep.!
Good write, from the heart, and loving them even if they are for , from you. Jusr beleive..............!!!!!!!


Brew~


Re: The Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:25:18 PM AEST
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Heartfelt..
I hear ya..

Yours-

B




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