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hiding in plain sight
trying to walk without legs
crying out of eyes with no light
clawing with bloody fingers
biting with jagged teeth
hearing without believing
praying with no relief
can't you hear what I am softly screaming?
I'm

I'm not

I'm not OK.

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I'm Not OK

Contributed by anitajames on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:13:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Fighting a losing battle
hiding in plain sight
trying to walk without legs
crying out of eyes with no light
clawing with bloody fingers
biting with jagged teeth
hearing without believing
praying with no relief
can't you hear what I am softly screaming?
I'm

I'm not

I'm not OK.

Copyright © anitajames ... [ 2005-09-15 21:13:05]
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Re: I'm Not OK (User Rating: 1 )
by JHONEN32629 on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:35:14 PM AEST
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I'ts a really good poem with lots of detail! Keep it up, I like it! At first I thought it was the " I'm Not Ok" song, by My Chemical Romance

Re: I'm Not OK (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 10:46:16 PM AEST
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good poem. I can relate to this really well. You are not alone on this feeling. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.

Re: I'm Not OK (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:12:40 AM AEST
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Very dark, liked the ending. Well done.

Re: I'm Not OK (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:57:59 AM AEST
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ahhh i like it, i liked the ending best quite clever

Re: I'm Not OK (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 04:13:37 PM AEST
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Very emotional, very well written.

Re: I'm Not OK (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:50:43 AM AEST
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Very emotional and heartbreaking. You wept on paper to write this, your tears the ink.
Well done.
David

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