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Array ( [sid] => 105790 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dying Again [time] => 2005-09-15 23:48:29 [hometext] => Broke up with a girl after a year and a half 2 days ago, not feeling great [bodytext] => How could I possibly describe this pain?
Knowing I caused it doesn’t help me stop the rain
And caught in this downpour I reached for her hand
Only to add my raindrops to the pain showering this man

I run away from where I had been safe
Exposed for what I am, naked from what the rain washed away
So scared of the storm I had weathered for so long
So confused by this storm, can’t see right or wrong

No shelter in sight I huddle for survival
Closing my eyes and seeing her arrival
Realizing it was the best thing I had ever had
Now I’m dying again, and it hurts so bad [comments] => 3 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 22 [informant] => tetniz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Dying Again

Contributed by tetniz on Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:48:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

How could I possibly describe this pain?
Knowing I caused it doesn’t help me stop the rain
And caught in this downpour I reached for her hand
Only to add my raindrops to the pain showering this man

I run away from where I had been safe
Exposed for what I am, naked from what the rain washed away
So scared of the storm I had weathered for so long
So confused by this storm, can’t see right or wrong

No shelter in sight I huddle for survival
Closing my eyes and seeing her arrival
Realizing it was the best thing I had ever had
Now I’m dying again, and it hurts so bad

Copyright Â© tetniz ... [ 2005-09-15 23:48:29]
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Re: Dying Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Twysted_Fate on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:03:41 AM AEST
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I know it sounds generic, but you'll be better soon, but that was well written, and best of luck

Re: Dying Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Lollypopxcore on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:36:42 AM AEST
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Very good poem.
Im very sorry for all it's worth.
xoxo

Re: Dying Again (User Rating: 1 )
by loving_poet3088 on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:14:02 PM AEST
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beautiful work, i like it alot it is very emotional and sad, and i like that thank you...

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