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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Rest of My Days
[time] => 2005-09-16 00:49:27
[hometext] => ..a re-write..
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My love .. If all your endearing and charm
that I gaze on so fondly today
were to change by tomorrow
and flee from my arms-
like fairy tales fading away..
you would still be adored ..
as this moment you are.
Your youthfulness fades, as it will..
I'd remiss all the ruin that rest in my heart
and love you eternaly still.
It's not that while beauty
and sweetness your own,
or your eyes unabashed by a tear,
that desire and fate of my soul would be known ..
though one thing's perpetually clear:
The birth of our love
will eternally shine
in all its benevolent ways...
For I've loved you since
Heaven created the skies ..
and I shall for the rest of my days.
All my Love,
Billy
[comments] => 16
[counter] => 323
[topic] => 14
[informant] => Man_On_High
[notes] => (Edited by Mod_11 for spelling)
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 49
[ratings] => 10
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DreamsandWishes
)
The Rest of My Days
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 12:49:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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My love .. If all your endearing and charm
that I gaze on so fondly today
were to change by tomorrow
and flee from my arms-
like fairy tales fading away..
you would still be adored ..
as this moment you are.
Your youthfulness fades, as it will..
I'd remiss all the ruin that rest in my heart
and love you eternaly still.
It's not that while beauty
and sweetness your own,
or your eyes unabashed by a tear,
that desire and fate of my soul would be known ..
though one thing's perpetually clear:
The birth of our love
will eternally shine
in all its benevolent ways...
For I've loved you since
Heaven created the skies ..
and I shall for the rest of my days.
All my Love,
Billy
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by remote on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:13:24 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, enjoyed it. |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:41:03 PM AEST
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Wonderful declaration of love...
Lucky Lady.....
Jenni |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:29:08 PM AEST
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The birth of our love will eternally shine in all its benevolent ways...
Who could ever ask for more than that in an enduring love? This is so touching, it brings sweet tears to the eyes from the heart.
Rita
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by brew on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:35:15 PM AEST
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Well, this one, i have read, and read..........and can only find a few words.to type. Go with what you still ..........want.! Love can not dimish, ........
Brew~ |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 02:17:40 AM AEST
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Simple, fervent, beautiful. I enjoyed each of these lines.
It's always rather like a treat each time I stumble across a real love poem, one that refuses to admit that such a thing as cliché is in existence...
Well done.
Andrew |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by brew on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 05:00:04 PM AEST
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A misfit of writings, this was given............adopted it has been, and adopted it will kept. To know, there is a certain of words expressed....... and more to come in the furture.............lots of time...........that is it "time"
Brew~ |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:52:56 PM AEST
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| That was a pure pleasure to read. I got some chills. As usual the words give way to such a bigger picture of life, love and that comes with it. I find it hard to believe that not everyone can relate to this somehow or someway. masterful. |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:15:44 AM AEST
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This poem reminds me of a song:
"You ask how much I love you
must I explain
I love you oh my darling
live roses need rain
You ask how long I'll love you
I'll tell you true
until the twelf of never
is how long I'll love you"
Thank you for a bueatiful poem.
Quote from "The twelf of never" by Johnny Mathis |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 08:22:15 PM AEST
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Wow, simply beautiful. I must admit I have a fondness for love
poems and this one is exceptionally written.
"I'd remiss all the ruin that rest in my heart and love you eternaly still."
Powerful right down to the soul. I love your style.
~Breezy
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 01:51:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful,i really enjoyed it!
God Bless |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 08:20:21 PM AEST
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Oh, Billy... it's beautiful. There simply is no need to ramble on here... a two word commentary somehow seems quite right.
~Snemmy
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 12:46:58 AM AEST
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An absolutely flawless piece of poetry you've written dearest Billy. What more can one ask for than an enduring love? Steals ones breath away and melts ones heart with such touching words. Your heart shines radiantly through this piece, Billy. You're a truly gifted writer, who never ceases to amaze me with the brilliant poems that he produces. Keep penning dear friend. It's always a pleasure to read ur remarkable work.
Hugs from ur devoted fan,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:44:38 PM AEST
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This is really beautiful. Heartwarming to say the least, and the flow just swept along with your loving thoughts. Good Job: )
Scorp. |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:05:23 PM AEST
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great write bro...very touching.
wiz |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:33:36 PM AEST
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Now this is one gorgeous write Billy,
*****For I've loved you since
Heaven created the skies ..
and I shall for the rest of my days.
Beautiful
Thanks a milliion
Raquel Leah |
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Re: The Rest of My Days
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 04:34:57 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem. May your love outlast the the skies.
Take care.
David |
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