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Array ( [sid] => 105796 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Twysted Love Poem [time] => 2005-09-16 01:56:17 [hometext] => Just thought I'd spew another tale of lust and loss....and what happens when I have too much free time..... [bodytext] => Our differences were clear,
Just as day was to the night,
The thin line had been blurred,
Between what’s wrong and right.
I mean, did you have to go,
And sleep with my brothers,
I’m guessing you’re still mad,
That I Slept with your Mother.

We both were quite drunk,
And had both gotten paid,
It was the beer, honest, baby,
The only reason I’d stray..

I’d never been in the position,
In which you had me found.
She was quick, so quick with the knots,
And as quickly was I bound.
It was over quickly,
So quickly it was done,
The twisted irony here,
Your soon to arrive step-brother,
He’ll also be my Son.

Cheating on you baby..
Something I never meant to do….
Yeah…uh, the devil made me do it,
No, you’re right, it was the booze..
It won’t happen again,
Please put down that knife,
It was a one time thing,
Won’t you spare my freaking life….

Oh damn it to hell, you cut me….
My God, that freaking hurt…
At least won’t you get me a band-aid,
To stop this raging bloody spurt..

Okay, I’d better finish this,
My visions getting blurry.
The blood, it runs down my chest,
Just like its in a hurry…
Where will it go,
What did it see,
Well first of all,
it must’ve seen you,
Because it too wants to flee..

Oh great, I’m dead now,
I hope you’re so damn happy.
At least this wacky story,
Can’t get anymore sappy..

I guess the moral of this story
Is that you should never stray,
As for this stories moral for me,
I’d of been better off gay..

WOMEN!!
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A Twysted Love Poem

Contributed by Twysted_Fate on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:56:17 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



Our differences were clear,
Just as day was to the night,
The thin line had been blurred,
Between what’s wrong and right.
I mean, did you have to go,
And sleep with my brothers,
I’m guessing you’re still mad,
That I Slept with your Mother.

We both were quite drunk,
And had both gotten paid,
It was the beer, honest, baby,
The only reason I’d stray..

I’d never been in the position,
In which you had me found.
She was quick, so quick with the knots,
And as quickly was I bound.
It was over quickly,
So quickly it was done,
The twisted irony here,
Your soon to arrive step-brother,
He’ll also be my Son.

Cheating on you baby..
Something I never meant to do….
Yeah…uh, the devil made me do it,
No, you’re right, it was the booze..
It won’t happen again,
Please put down that knife,
It was a one time thing,
Won’t you spare my freaking life….

Oh damn it to hell, you cut me….
My God, that freaking hurt…
At least won’t you get me a band-aid,
To stop this raging bloody spurt..

Okay, I’d better finish this,
My visions getting blurry.
The blood, it runs down my chest,
Just like its in a hurry…
Where will it go,
What did it see,
Well first of all,
it must’ve seen you,
Because it too wants to flee..

Oh great, I’m dead now,
I hope you’re so damn happy.
At least this wacky story,
Can’t get anymore sappy..

I guess the moral of this story
Is that you should never stray,
As for this stories moral for me,
I’d of been better off gay..

WOMEN!!




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Re: A Twysted Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:15:13 AM AEST
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Cute.... good moral though.

Great job.


Sonya


Re: A Twysted Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Lollypopxcore on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:30:09 AM AEST
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HAHAHHAHAHA
that was GREAT.
erm...sorry.
AWWWwww
is that true?....nahhhh couldnt be..that's weird.
haha "No, you're right it was the booze"
haha Perfection!


Re: A Twysted Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:37:03 AM AEST
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good poem, made me smile :)


Re: A Twysted Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 12:20:43 PM AEST
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LMAO! Yep. Don't mess with us women: )

Serves you right :P j/k lol

Funny...This gave me a laugh.


Scorp.


Re: A Twysted Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 06:58:45 AM AEST
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LOL That was really good. What a lovely love story ;-}

Thanks for making me laugh :)

Tim


Re: A Twysted Love Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:04:01 AM AEST
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how often when men stray you learn too late. lol.. good write





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